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Masky's POV

PUNCH

"That's for trying to kill me!" I yelled at Red as I punched him right in the gut. Slender gave him a black eye and a few broken bones, but at least he left some bones for me to break. I've killed a lot of people, but I can't kill Red. He can get bruised up, but sadly he's immortal. Which sucks. I punch his jaw and heard a cracking sound. He fell to the floor and spit out a tooth. I grab his shirt and look him dead in the eye. "You better listen Red cause I'm only going to say this once. Stay away from (Name)! She's mine! So you better deal with it or else!" I throw him to the floor and walk away. I thought of (Name) and how great our relation ship was. I know she really does love me, and I love her.

 

Could my life be any better?

 

The End

 

Sorry for the long wait. Oh and by the way.....:iconmanvsspiderplz::iconmanvsspiderplz::iconmanvsspiderplz::iconmanvsspiderplz::iconmanvsspiderplz:

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Apollosmoon Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Love your storie/series, there must have been a pretty big deal of work put into them, and for that, I thank you.😃
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Theresa-Maria-Falcon Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey long time no see ! How you've been !? :D
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Apollosmoon Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
good, i guess, my deviantart accout timed out for, like, 3 days. just got back on today. how have you been? also, HAPPY NEW YEARS!!!!! ITS 2016!!!!!
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Theresa-Maria-Falcon Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I've been good and HAPPY NEW YEAR EVERYBODY !!!
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Apollosmoon Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
*VIRTUAL HUGS* X3
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Theresa-Maria-Falcon Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HUUUUUUUGS !!!!!! ('3') *hugs*
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Apollosmoon Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
listen to this song, were headphones. You have to right click and it should be there.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=SJkj3D…
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Theresa-Maria-Falcon Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hum ! I've just finsih it and that's good ! i like the music and the lyrics too !
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Theresa-Maria-Falcon Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*hugs a lot of time*
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Apollosmoon Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
My friend is having a New years party tonight. Sadly I'm not going, but this is what i imagen it to be like:

rainbow party Professor Party Bill cipher party hardcore Party Hard icon Party Cat Party MMD human Goldy emoticon GIF Star vs. the Forces of Evil -  Dance Party hard! :flowerboogie: Rave Emote Party Time 
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Theresa-Maria-Falcon Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The party between the teens of my ages, a summary of what they drink or eat: beer beer beer beer drug drug drug drug beer beer beer etc
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vampirelover247 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2015  Student Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful, I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever, I dont like u...I love u, I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away
.Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will…
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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wolfwind101 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
while i was reading the last chapter i had in idea this is not a request only a mare suggestion if you want to you can do it if you don't it's ok i'll continue my idea in my imagination
a ben x reader
SAO style
what do you think you can do it but if you don't want to i understand (i might do it if you don't want to) anyway not a request only a mare suggestion ok bye
:D
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
XD I loved this! wait one sec i gotta eat a bite of my pepperoni pizza I just got       *nom*     okay I'm good now! 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015   Writer
LOL
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
yeah well the pizza was NUMMY!!! lol it was really good I hadn't had pizza before that for almost a year
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CrazyBanana360 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Student General Artist
Hahahahaha that's funny because I just finished eating pizza
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
XD ikr I love pizza except certain kinds cause they taste BLEH
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CrazyBanana360 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Student General Artist
XD hahaha true
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
yeeeeeppp
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CrazyBanana360 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Student General Artist
:D
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
I am a dummy! 
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CrazyBanana360 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Student General Artist
:D
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shywerido Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist
:D This story is so awesome!
Btw what do I type in for the icon in the description???
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dragonmaster12001 Featured By Owner May 4, 2015
Cute
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XxBunnyBellexX Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  Student Artist
This was awesome :)
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015   Writer
Thank you
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XxBunnyBellexX Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Student Artist
Your welcome ^-^
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Mangleartist1 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I nearly cried when Masky was knocked out! I thought he was DEAD!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015   Writer
No one dies here
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Sparkythedog111 Featured By Owner May 6, 2015   Artist
Ever
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NoraOuran90 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015
This has got to be one of the best fanfictiins I have ever read
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015   Writer
Thank you.... If you have a request I'm all ears. I do hetalia and pretty soon five nights at Freddy's 
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NoraOuran90 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
Lol I do not have a request, but if I ever do I'll be sure to tell u ^-^
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EdwardRichtofen93511 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Oh beating creepy pasta to near but impossible death

Good times:-)
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015   Writer
lol
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Jadeypoo2015 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015
Imagine if hoodie was the one to get jealous that would've been sick!! Although I know masky defiantly wouldn't beat up his best friend ~<3
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015   Writer
Yus
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xaldin03 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Student General Artist
The ending is awesome. And I know who it can get better Masky.
Masky: how?
You becoming a farther.
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LoneWolfOfTheWoods1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
Are you a kingdom hearts fan? That's axel!!!!
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xaldin03 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Student General Artist
I am and I know it's Axel. Are you a fan too?
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LoneWolfOfTheWoods1 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015
YES IM ADDICTED TO THE GAMES
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xaldin03 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Student General Artist
Calm down.
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
LOL I love Kingdom Hearts :3..... and minecraft that's besides the point though XD I used to play Kingdom Hearts all the time till my brother literally snapped the disk in half
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xaldin03 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015  Student General Artist
Well he's so mean like Saix.
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
yeah :(
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015   Writer
You mean father?
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xaldin03 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Student General Artist
Yup
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TheLonelyWolf200 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Student General Artist
Good job on this! :3 The ending killed me. XD
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015   Writer
:)
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