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Masky's POV

PUNCH

"That's for trying to kill me!" I yelled at Red as I punched him right in the gut. Slender gave him a black eye and a few broken bones, but at least he left some bones for me to break. I've killed a lot of people, but I can't kill Red. He can get bruised up, but sadly he's immortal. Which sucks. I punch his jaw and heard a cracking sound. He fell to the floor and spit out a tooth. I grab his shirt and look him dead in the eye. "You better listen Red cause I'm only going to say this once. Stay away from (Name)! She's mine! So you better deal with it or else!" I throw him to the floor and walk away. I thought of (Name) and how great our relation ship was. I know she really does love me, and I love her.

 

Could my life be any better?

 

The End

 

Sorry for the long wait. Oh and by the way.....:iconmanvsspiderplz::iconmanvsspiderplz::iconmanvsspiderplz::iconmanvsspiderplz::iconmanvsspiderplz:

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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
XD I loved this! wait one sec i gotta eat a bite of my pepperoni pizza I just got       *nom*     okay I'm good now! 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015   Writer
LOL
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
yeah well the pizza was NUMMY!!! lol it was really good I hadn't had pizza before that for almost a year
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CrazyBanana360 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Student General Artist
Hahahahaha that's funny because I just finished eating pizza
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
XD ikr I love pizza except certain kinds cause they taste BLEH
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CrazyBanana360 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Student General Artist
XD hahaha true
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
yeeeeeppp
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CrazyBanana360 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2015  Student General Artist
:D
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:iconshadowraven12:
Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
I am a dummy! 
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CrazyBanana360 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  Student General Artist
:D
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shywerido Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist
:D This story is so awesome!
Btw what do I type in for the icon in the description???
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dragonmaster12001 Featured By Owner May 4, 2015  Hobbyist
Cute
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XxBunnyBellexX Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  Student Artist
This was awesome :)
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015   Writer
Thank you
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XxBunnyBellexX Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Student Artist
Your welcome ^-^
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Mangleartist1 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I nearly cried when Masky was knocked out! I thought he was DEAD!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015   Writer
No one dies here
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Sparkythedog111 Featured By Owner May 6, 2015   Artist
Ever
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NoraOuran90 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015
This has got to be one of the best fanfictiins I have ever read
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015   Writer
Thank you.... If you have a request I'm all ears. I do hetalia and pretty soon five nights at Freddy's 
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NoraOuran90 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
Lol I do not have a request, but if I ever do I'll be sure to tell u ^-^
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EdwardRichtofen93511 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Oh beating creepy pasta to near but impossible death

Good times:-)
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015   Writer
lol
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Jadeypoo2015 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015
Imagine if hoodie was the one to get jealous that would've been sick!! Although I know masky defiantly wouldn't beat up his best friend ~<3
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015   Writer
Yus
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xaldin03 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Student General Artist
The ending is awesome. And I know who it can get better Masky.
Masky: how?
You becoming a farther.
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LoneWolfOfTheWoods1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
Are you a kingdom hearts fan? That's axel!!!!
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:iconxaldin03:
xaldin03 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Student General Artist
I am and I know it's Axel. Are you a fan too?
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LoneWolfOfTheWoods1 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015
YES IM ADDICTED TO THE GAMES
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:iconxaldin03:
xaldin03 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Student General Artist
Calm down.
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
LOL I love Kingdom Hearts :3..... and minecraft that's besides the point though XD I used to play Kingdom Hearts all the time till my brother literally snapped the disk in half
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xaldin03 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015  Student General Artist
Well he's so mean like Saix.
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:iconshadowraven12:
Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
yeah :(
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015   Writer
You mean father?
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:iconxaldin03:
xaldin03 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Student General Artist
Yup
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TheLonelyWolf200 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Student General Artist
Good job on this! :3 The ending killed me. XD
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015   Writer
:)
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TheLonelyWolf200 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Student General Artist
You are good at making these stories. :3 It gave me the feel that something strange might happen at the third part.
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UnaNocheLoca Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014  Student
I love it!! :heart: I read it since the beginning, it's amazing!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014   Writer
Thank you
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UnaNocheLoca Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Student
Your very welcome. Keep up the good work. :)
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fire2537 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the icon, makes me crack up everytime I see it ^.^
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014   Writer
Me too
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Monochrome-Aki Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
yep you just love that icon dont ya? XD 
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014   Writer
Yes
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Monochrome-Aki Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
haha
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Solsilja24 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 27, 2014  Student Artist
I loved your story <3 :D
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014   Writer
Thanks
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thekittengemEmerald Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
MY MASKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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meabh-massacre Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
NO MINE
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