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Masky's POV

PUNCH

"That's for trying to kill me!" I yelled at Red as I punched him right in the gut. Slender gave him a black eye and a few broken bones, but at least he left some bones for me to break. I've killed a lot of people, but I can't kill Red. He can get bruised up, but sadly he's immortal. Which sucks. I punch his jaw and heard a cracking sound. He fell to the floor and spit out a tooth. I grab his shirt and look him dead in the eye. "You better listen Red cause I'm only going to say this once. Stay away from (Name)! She's mine! So you better deal with it or else!" I throw him to the floor and walk away. I thought of (Name) and how great our relation ship was. I know she really does love me, and I love her.

 

Could my life be any better?

 

The End

 

Sorry for the long wait. Oh and by the way.....:iconmanvsspiderplz::iconmanvsspiderplz::iconmanvsspiderplz::iconmanvsspiderplz::iconmanvsspiderplz:

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:iconxxbunnybellexx:
XxBunnyBellexX Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  New member Student Artist
This was awesome :)
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015   Writer
Thank you
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XxBunnyBellexX Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  New member Student Artist
Your welcome ^-^
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Mangleartist1 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
I nearly cried when Masky was knocked out! I thought he was DEAD!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015   Writer
No one dies here
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NoraOuran90 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2015
This has got to be one of the best fanfictiins I have ever read
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015   Writer
Thank you.... If you have a request I'm all ears. I do hetalia and pretty soon five nights at Freddy's 
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:iconnoraouran90:
NoraOuran90 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015
Lol I do not have a request, but if I ever do I'll be sure to tell u ^-^
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EdwardRichtofen93511 Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Oh beating creepy pasta to near but impossible death

Good times:-)
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2015   Writer
lol
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:iconjadeypoo2015:
Jadeypoo2015 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  New member
Imagine if hoodie was the one to get jealous that would've been sick!! Although I know masky defiantly wouldn't beat up his best friend ~<3
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015   Writer
Yus
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:iconxaldin03:
xaldin03 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015  Student General Artist
The ending is awesome. And I know who it can get better Masky.
Masky: how?
You becoming a farther.
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LoneWolfOfTheWoods1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
Are you a kingdom hearts fan? That's axel!!!!
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:iconxaldin03:
xaldin03 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015  Student General Artist
I am and I know it's Axel. Are you a fan too?
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:iconlonewolfofthewoods1:
LoneWolfOfTheWoods1 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015
YES IM ADDICTED TO THE GAMES
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:iconxaldin03:
xaldin03 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2015  Student General Artist
Calm down.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2015   Writer
You mean father?
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:iconxaldin03:
xaldin03 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015  Student General Artist
Yup
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TheLonelyWolf200 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2015  Student General Artist
Good job on this! :3 The ending killed me. XD
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015   Writer
:)
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:iconthelonelywolf200:
TheLonelyWolf200 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2015  Student General Artist
You are good at making these stories. :3 It gave me the feel that something strange might happen at the third part.
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:iconunanocheloca:
UnaNocheLoca Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014  Student
I love it!! :heart: I read it since the beginning, it's amazing!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014   Writer
Thank you
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UnaNocheLoca Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Student
Your very welcome. Keep up the good work. :)
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fire2537 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the icon, makes me crack up everytime I see it ^.^
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014   Writer
Me too
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:iconmonochrome-aki:
Monochrome-Aki Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
yep you just love that icon dont ya? XD 
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014   Writer
Yes
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Monochrome-Aki Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
haha
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:iconsolsilja24:
Solsilja24 Featured By Owner Edited Aug 27, 2014  Student Artist
I loved your story <3 :D
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014   Writer
Thanks
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:iconthekittengememerald:
thekittengemEmerald Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
MY MASKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconmeabh-massacre:
meabh-massacre Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2014  Student Digital Artist
NO MINE
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:iconmonochrome-aki:
Monochrome-Aki Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
NO MINE!! *picks him up and runs away*
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:iconmeabh-massacre:
meabh-massacre Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
MINEEEEEEEE
*CHASES AND GRABS HIM BACK*
MY MASKY!!!!!! -.-
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:iconmonochrome-aki:
Monochrome-Aki Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
NO MINE!! *GRABS AND RUNS FAR AWAY* MINE MINE MINE MINE!!

masky: O.o ????!!
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meabh-massacre Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
NOOOOOOOOOOOO
*CHASES*
HES MINE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I SAW HIM FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconmonochrome-aki:
Monochrome-Aki Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
NO I DID!! *RUNS FASTER* HE'S MINE!!!
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:iconmeabh-massacre:
meabh-massacre Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
*TACLES*
JUST GIVE ME THE MASKY AND NO ONE GETS HURT!!!!!!!!!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014   Writer
Yes
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silvermistwolf14 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
holy shat this was an amazing story! 

Frozen - Olaf's Happy Icon 
XD
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014   Writer
Thank you
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:iconmoonangel111:
moonangel111 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD I love how your finale wasnt them getting married or shit it was masky being all RED YOU LITTLE SLUT SHE IS MINE ASSHAT! And beating the shit outta him
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014   Writer
Don't like possessive boyfriends?
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:iconmoonangel111:
moonangel111 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
eh, depends on HOW possesive
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014   Writer
ok
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:iconmoonangel111:
moonangel111 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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ViolentNight Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww lovely ending my friend. Again you are an excellent writer.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner May 26, 2014   Writer
Thank you again
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