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Masky left, he said he had to take care of something. I stayed home and went into my room. I went on my computer and lodged into Facebook. There I saw a bunch of post from kids at school. They were all talking about what happened today and they shared how they felt about my ex cheating on me.

'Dudes this guy came to my school and totally owned (Ex's name)! It was awesome!'

'Ladies beware. (Ex's name) is a dog! He will cheat on you.'

'I thought (Ex's name) was a cool guy. Until I found out he cheated on his girl!'

'Some guy came and schooled (Ex's name) I posted it on my YouTube so you could see for your self.'

'I feel really bad for (Name). No wonder she seemed so depressed lately'

'Don't worry (Name) I know what it's like to be cheated on. There are other guys in the world that are loyal to their girls. Like me ^^'

'(Ex's name) your a bad person and you should feel bad!'

'Hang in there (Name)'

'(Ex's name) cheated on (Name). Is he a jerk or what?'

'I heard (Ex's name) cheated in his girlfriend with (Enemy's name) and she's a fucking slut! I heard she slept with the whole basketball team.'

'(Ex's name) you are a liar and a cheater and you don't deserve a girlfriend! And (Enemy's name) your a whore!'

I couldn't help but smile at the post. Know everyone knows what he did to me. I hear my cell phone ring and see that I got a text. I look at it and see it was from (Ex's name) saying 'Can we talk?' I text back 'NO!'. For the next few minutes he calls and text me trying to get me to talk to him. But I'm not falling for it. I hear the door bell ring. Thinking it was Masky I walk out my room, go down stairs and open the door. Only to see that it was my ex. I slam the door in his face yelling "Go away!" "(Name) please I just wanna talk." he begged. "Leave before I have you arrested for trespassing!" "Go ahead, cause I'm not leaving until we talk." Defeated I open the door. "What do you want?" "Look (Name) I know your mad, and you have every right to be. I did something horrible. But please believe that I really am sorry. Let me make it up to you. Give me another chance." he pleaded.

"No. Its like he said. You had your chance and you blew it. You decided to push me off for the girl you know I hate. Even if I hadn't met someone else I still wouldn't take you back because I know for a fact you would just do it again. I gave you my trust, I gave you my heart and you shredded them like paper! I thought you might have actually been the one for me! I thought I loved you but obviously I was wrong! Your nothing but a liar and user! And to think I blamed myself for what you did! I thought you cheated because I wasn't pretty enough, that I wasn't good enough! I thought you cared about me but you obviously don't give a damn about how I care! And not once did you try to apologize for what you did before today! Your only apologizing because everyone knows what you did and you just don't want to deal with the humiliation! Your not sorry because you feel bad! YOUR SORRY BECAUSE YOU GOT CAUGHT!! YOUR SORRY BECAUSE EVERYONE KNOWS THE KIND OF PERSON YOU ARE!!! DO YOU EVEN HAVE ANY IDEA OF THE PAIN YOU PUT ME THROUGH?!?! ALL THE NIGHTS I CRIED MY SELF TO SLEEP WONDERING WHY YOU DID THIS TO ME?!?! I HATE YOU (Ex's name)!!! I HATE YOU MORE THAN ANYTHING AND I WISH YOU WOULD JUST DROP DEAD!!!"

I slammed the door again only harder this time. "(Name) please I.....I'm sorry." I stormed up the stairs and into my room. I grabbed the pillow off my bed and scream into it as loud as I could. After a few minutes of sobbing I went out like a light.

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'My poor, poor (Name). Your don't deserve all this suffering you've gone through.' I walk over to the bed and neal down so I'm face to face with her. I take off my cap to help get a better look. I kiss her cheek and leave her to sleep. If (Name) is ever going to be mine, I need to eliminate the completion. I hope Hoodie doesn't mind working alone.
Let the guessing begin :iconmanvsspiderplz: (love dis soo much)
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:iconshywerido:
shywerido Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist
I personally think that the song
Your not sorry, by Taylor Swift
Fits this perfectly. :D
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IamCreepypastaGirl Featured By Owner Edited Apr 20, 2015  New member
Whose dis gonna be....? I'm gonna continue reading to find out.
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horeylew Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015
hmmm a cap . . . . the only pastas i can think of that have caps are glitchy red, strangled red, and lost silver so i'm gonna just go and keep reading and find out :3
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015   Writer
good idea
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LoneWolfOfTheWoods1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
I think it might be ticci toby
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015   Writer
I like ticci
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:iconskyrahwriter16:
skyrahwriter16 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014
i thing it might be jeff
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014   Writer
You'll See~
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:iconilovewolfpups:
ilovewolfpups Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
is it weirde that im reading this and listening to party music? XDDDD DEH PARTY FEELS MIZED WITH IDK FEELSSSS
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014   Writer
no
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:iconsomebody772:
Somebody772 Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
Damn, I dont read Pokepasta D: I dont know the diffrence on em'! Whats Strangled red? Glitchy red? Whaa? Huhidontunderstandanything >.<
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner May 25, 2014   Writer
I'm not an expert in pokepasta so I can't really explain
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:iconinkheart4568:
InkHeart4568 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Im reading this...while listening to the song 'Listen to your Heart' by DHT...
and somehow I feel emotional for some reason...

GOSHDARNIT FEELS!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner May 23, 2014   Writer
the feeeeeeeelllllls
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:iconxprincessbubblegumx:
XPrincessbubblegumX Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Student Digital Artist
IS he a Jerk...OR NAH :P
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner May 22, 2014   Writer
.....Jerk
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:iconvikhop:
vikhop Featured By Owner May 12, 2014  Student Interface Designer
OMG OMG OMG OMGO OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG why you always do this? you killing me right now D: 
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner May 12, 2014   Writer
sorry....
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:icondemonoftheheart4life:
h-Hoodie? NO! Your Masky's best bro can't do this to him!!!! (cries in a corner)
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014   Writer
Its not Hoodie. Come from ur :iconemocornerplz:
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:icondemonoftheheart4life:
I know I found that out when I read the next chapter. YAY!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014   Writer
ok
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:icondemonoftheheart4life:
I was sooo happy. I was soooo worried
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xXShadowKnight Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
Please not Strangled red.. i love him Dx
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014   Writer
:\
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:iconmewmew465561:
mewmew465561 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014
What's the difference between strangled red and glitchy red ?

Besides the obvious .
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   Writer
Which one, which one
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:iconsilvazerock:
silvazerock Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cap?
*realisation hits* OMFG POKÉPASTA'S WHICH ONE IS IT?!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014   Writer
POKEPASTA
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:iconsilvazerock:
silvazerock Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OHMURGAWD WHY RED WHYYYYYYYY (just read on) *dramatically falls to knees*
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eunicesakuyaki12 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Student General Artist
It's either Glitchy Red or Strangled Red....and i think it is Strangled Red.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014   Writer
Maybe~
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:iconxtoxicflossx:
xToxicFlossx Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think the only creepypasta that has a cap is that Pokemon guy one (I hope I'm right)
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
There actually two pokemon guys with caps
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:iconxtoxicflossx:
xToxicFlossx Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, I only know strangled red, wat else?
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
Glitchy Red and Lost Silver
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:iconxtoxicflossx:
xToxicFlossx Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OOOOOOOOH NOW I REMEMBER!
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:iconkokoapurr:
Kokoapurr Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I can think at least four people who it could be. Time to go find out.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013   Writer
:D
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:iconswiftkill2000xboxliv:
Swiftkill2000Xboxliv Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ben know it the word that points it out is cap
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013   Writer
Not Ben.
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:iconswiftkill2000xboxliv:
Swiftkill2000Xboxliv Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i know now XD 
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:iconthequern:
TheQuern Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
BEN. I THINK ITS BEN.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013   Writer
Maybe....maybe not
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:iconthequern:
TheQuern Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It wasn't ben, right? I forgot..>.<
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013   Writer
No
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013   Writer
No it wasn't
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:iconbuckni1:
buckni1 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013
Is it ticci Toby?
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013   Writer
Who?
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:iconpastacreeps:
PastaCreeps Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Student Artist
*INSERT EPIC GASP HERE* Y-you dont know who Ticci Toby is?!?! Q~Q
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