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Masky's POV

I woke up and my vision was blurry. I rubbed my eyes, trying to get my vision back and was hit with a massive headache. I groaned in pain and rubbed my head. It felt like there was something wrapped around it. My vision came back but the pain in my head was still there. "What the hell happened?" I asked myself. "Someone tried to kill you." I hear someone say. I look over and see Slenderman. "Welcome back to the land of the living." he said. "Hey Slender. What happened-OW!" A whole wave of pain shot through my whole head when my hand reached a certain spot. "You shouldn't touch that spot on your head, you'll make it worse." he said. "What happened?" I repeated. "I found you with a gash in your head and in a pool of your own blood." "What? How long have I been out?" "A week." "A week?!" Once he said that the first thing that popped up in my mind was (Name). She's probably worried as hell about me. "Yes, who ever attacked you meant to kill you and probably think they have. What's the last thing you remember?" "I remember running into Red....and then everything went black." "Strangled Red?" "Yeah. He said something about meeting a girl and taking out the competition." "Hmm I wonder what he meant. Well the important thing is your alright, and I didn't lose my proxy."

I wasn't really paying attention. All I could think about was (Name). "Masky. Masky. Masky!" "Huh, uh what?" I snapped out of my thoughts and looked at him. "Is something else bothering you?" "N-No I was just thinking." "Masky you may be my proxy, but your also my friend. Now what's going on." 'I knew I would have to tell him sooner or later.' "Well....a couple years ago I met this girl. I started seeing her and we became friends. After a while I...." "You grew feelings for her?" I nodded. There was an awkward silence until he finally broke it. "Wait you said Red met a girl and that he said something about taking out the competition right?" "That's what I remember." "Do you think it's possible that the girl he was talking about is the girl you've seeing?" I thought about it for a moment, then my eyes widen in realization. "That son of a bitch! He tried to kill me just so he could get to (Name)!" I jumped out of the bed I was on but Slender stopped me. "Masky, your too weak to leave. You wouldn't survive in a fight against him. If what you say is true then he might already taken her. I understand if you want to get her back but its best if you let me handle it." I wanted to argue, but he had a point. Red put a huge gash in my head so I can imagine what he'll do to me when I'm this weak. "Alright. Just don't hurt her." "I won't." And he was gone. Teleported to who knows where. Now I was alone, with (Name) being the only thing I could think about.
Does this count as a cliffhanger? If it does I regret nothing :icontrollfaceplz:
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Dragonwolf505 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Still nothing!!!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015   Writer
That's right
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LoneWolfOfTheWoods1 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015
Aww so thoughtful
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2015   Writer
:meow:
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JaceTheKiller Featured By Owner Edited Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol red fuck very few with him as the bad guy! HAHA YESSSSSSS oh and... poor masky xD
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014   Writer
:XD:
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JaceTheKiller Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yusshhhhh ik i'm fucking halarious (Red:no not rlly) WHO SAID THAT
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DiamondEyes15 Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014
Poor masky :[ 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2014   Writer
yes
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BaddassWANNABE Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:trollfaceplz: ? why does it say that
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014   Writer
:icon trollfaceplz:=:icontrollfaceplz:
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creeperofthenight Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Student General Artist
I like to keep people on cliff hangers for a week the past up a authored note just to mess with them.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014   Writer
LOL
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Hope-Candy Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
Dumb cliffhangers
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014   Writer
:icontrollfaceplz:
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ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That adrenaline rush you get when someone puts a gash in your head, your out for a week, and you realize that the son of a bitch that put the gash in your head also took your girlfriend. Masky got so pumped that he would probably saved me if he lost a hand or was bleeding from the lung! XD i so random!!!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014   Writer
XD
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CreppyPastaMember101 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
maaake mooooore Lol Eyeless Jack XD 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013   Writer
Also finished
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wiecute Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013
wait is there anymore?
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013   Writer
Yes
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madster111 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
...NOOOOOOOO!!!!......BUT YESSSSSSSS!!!!!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013   Writer
XXD
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madster111 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
XXXD
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Magicgirl4m Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Professional Filmographer
:iconmoarplz:
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013   Writer
Ok
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Kaylylynii22 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013
I loves it!!! But did Red do bad things? :iconimshockedplz:
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013   Writer
I just needed someone other than Rake and Seedeater to be the bad guy.
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Kaylylynii22 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013
Ahhh.... Okay!!! X3
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GaaraxLaara Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
awesome <3
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013   Writer
Thanks :heart:
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animegeek220 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013
A gona die weres the next chapter:'(
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013   Writer
be here soon
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XxxHidanaxxX Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
ILL MAKE U REGRET DIS!!!!!! D:< -holding her big ass scythe-
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013   Writer
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XxxHidanaxxX Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
MORRRAAAAAA -rage-
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undertakerofheaven Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student General Artist
asdfghjuikol whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013   Writer
avkjnfojsnbfej I dunno.
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Kenziestarblack Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconidiedplz: NUUU DUMB CLIFFHANGER
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013   Writer
Trollololol
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Kenziestarblack Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
-slaps with fish- HOW DARE YOU
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013   Writer
Don't slap meh with da fish
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Kenziestarblack Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
-slaps with fish again and runs away yelling- TEEHEE
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013   Writer
You slap meh with a fish I slap you with a squid.
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Kenziestarblack Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
EWWWW SQUID
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013   Writer
LMAO
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Maddiecat16 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Trollololololol!!but but I wanna know what happens!!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013   Writer
Youll see soon
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Maddiecat16 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay!!!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013   Writer
Wo ho! :iconhomerplz:
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