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"I mean it (Name) you are the luckiest girl in school. Do you know what these girls would do for a secret admirer!" my best friend Sarah said as we sat down for lunch. I had just told her about my secret admirer Jack. He's been leaving presents and love letters for the past two weeks. Even though I haven't even met him yet I'm starting to get feelings for him. "I know Sarah. Which is why I want this to stay between me and you. Ok?" I said. "Alright. Do your parents know?" "No. They'd never let me hear the end of it if they found out."
"So, what's his name?"
"Jack."
"Have you met him yet?"
"No. If I did he wouldn't be secret anymore."
"Point taken. Hey, think you could show me one of the letters?"
"Tomorrow, I don't have one with me."
"Do they say the sweetest things?"
"Yes, and this is where it gets really romantic."
"Well. Don't keep me waiting."
I look from side to side to make sure no one is listening.
"He said he loves me."
"O.M.G. That's is soooooo cute!"

The bell rang signing that lunch was over.

~Time skip~

Finally school was over. I walk over to my locker and open it. "Hey (Name)." I hear Sarah call as she runs over to me. "Hey Sarah." I replied. I faced the inside of my locker and start to smell.....cologne? "Do you smell that?" I asked. "Smells like a guy's cologne." Sarah said. I look in my locker and next to my notebooks is and envelope. I grab it and pull it out, putting to my nose. It smelled like the cologne. "Is that from Jack?" Sarah asked. I open it and reach for what's inside. I pull out a silver chain with a hook and loop, and at the end is a heart shaped pendent with the word 'Angel' engraved on it. The chain was taped to a folded paper. I remove the tape and unfold the paper, and on it, in what looked like red paint was ' For you my beautiful angel. Love Jack' I start to blush.

Suddenly the note and necklace were snatched right out of my hand. "Oooo, what's this?" Said a familiar and annoying voice. I looked over and saw a blonde haired girl dressed like a slut, two other girls dressed the same why, and their boyfriends. "Give them back Whitney!" I demanded. I tried to reach for them, but her boyfriend pushed me, causing me to slam against the lockers. "Hey!" Sarah yelled. She tried the same thing I did, only to end up on the floor. "Nice necklace. I think I'll keep it. Oh and tell Jack he can do sooo much better." They all laughed. Whitney gave the necklace to her boyfriend so he could put it on for her. I started to feel tears build up in my eyes. "I didn't know sluts could get jealous!" I snapped at her. Her boyfriend walked over and slapped in the face. He raised his hand to do it again.

Suddenly, someone grabbed her boyfriend's wrist. Who ever it was they were wearing all black. Black hoodie, black joggers, black gym shoes, black gloves, sunglasses, and a blue scarf covering the rest of his face. But I could see a little bit of his dark brown hair sticking out from the top of his hoodie. "Who the hell-" "Give it back." Said the boy in black. "Uhhh, excuse me?" Whitney asked "Give it back." The boy repeated. "And if I don't?" Her boyfriend asked. All I heard was a cracking sound and him screaming. "YOU BASTARD YOU BROKE MY WRIST!" "That's not the only thing I'm gonna break!" All I could hear was screaming and bones breaking. The other boyfriends tried to help, but they ended up the same way. Who ever the boy in black was, he really knew how to fight. I noticed the necklace on the floor, but Whitney grabbed it. Before she could even get her hand off the ground, the boy stomped on her hand. She screamed bloody murder. "Let! Go!" The boy demanded. Whitney did what she was told. She looked at her broken hand and cried like a baby. The boy picked up the necklace and walked over to me. He put his gloved hand on my cheek. I hissed a little because of the pain. He then replaced his hand with his lips. I blushed hard. "I will never let any one hurt you." He whispered. He put the necklace in my hand and me close it. "Jack?" I asked. But he suddenly took off running down the hall and out of sight. "Oh. My. God." Sarah said. "You can say that again." I replied.
And the winner is (drum role) Eyeless Jack.
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EmotionsLocked Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2015  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
OMG I LOVE IT!!!
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Sbegzies Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2015
I have a friend named Sarah whose locker is on the other side of the hall and two more lockers down from mine :D Accuracy 
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XxPopcornMCxX Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2015  New Deviant
0.0
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Ticci-Senpai Featured By Owner May 31, 2015  New Deviant
Beautiful! You're style is detailed but not over the top. (I have ADHD) It's not too short or long. Keep it up!
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Darkwater123 Featured By Owner May 28, 2015  New Deviant
That slut is so mean
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shywerido Featured By Owner May 16, 2015  Hobbyist
YASS!(I hate a Whitney irl. She bullied me... T-T....Im too shy and stuff.....)
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NekoMinecrafter Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
For me Whitney irl is a facebook friend, and im super shy, but my sisters name is Sarah..... HMMMMMMMMMMM
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maskygirl420 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
so fun
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Gryphon1313 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2015
That awkward moment when my name is Sarah... ^_^
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Dragonwolf505 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Oooh
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015   Writer
Awkwaaaaarrrrd
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LoneWolfOfTheWoods1 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015
This is getting interesting
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015   Writer
Thank you
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XXxSilverBladexXX Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Aww this is adorable :,3 EJ is my favorite and he's amazing. You should totally make more of these! They're really good
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015   Writer
:3
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AskWhiteWolfViolet Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Violeta: this is one of the best ff I've ever read!! And I read a lot and I mean A LOT of ff XD XD XD
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015   Writer
Really?
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AskWhiteWolfViolet Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Violeta: Yup XD XD XD
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bleckthecat Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
daww, you write so well. 

Eyeless Jack 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014   Writer
:)
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bleckthecat Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
 ^^
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sparklerthesableye Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww...
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2014   Writer
:3
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Ask-Vixy-the-Fox1987 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Student Digital Artist
OMG I FEEL SOOOO IN LOVE WITH THIS!!!!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014   Writer
yay
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Ask-Vixy-the-Fox1987 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
XD
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BlueWolfieART Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMG I LOVE THIS X READER WITH E.J!!!!!!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014   Writer
Yay
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Edited Dec 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
XD that's obvious XD wish I could've helped tho,now I feel weak ;^;

( goes to emo corner ) 
this was awesome Anywayz!!!!
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Fanfictions112 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Cyn: *cuts hair to where it isnt emo* I'll protect you! *says as cheesy fanfare plays in the background*

Claire: O.M.G *facepalm* I am so sorry. I apologies about her. . .
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  Student Digital Artist
It's okep. XD I don't need protecting doe .3.
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Fanfictions112 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist General Artist
Cyn: Take care of yourself! Never abandon your dreams!

Claire: *facedesk*
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015  Student Digital Artist
( places pillow on desk and face palms )
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014   Writer
:<
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
T^T
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GreytheGreyt Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  Student General Artist
:heart:s for youuuu!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2014   Writer
:meow:
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GreytheGreyt Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Yusss
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felishathewolf1 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:3
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014   Writer
:meow:
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felishathewolf1 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Lol  :iconeyelessjackplz:
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littleEEVEE564 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Student General Artist
E.j:31.media.tumblr.com/e593c0689e…
Dash: Lol if my head were bleeding due to impact wouldn't b able to tell
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014   Writer
Very funny :)
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littleEEVEE564 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2014  Student General Artist
Dash & mist : :3
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Acrytexy Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
If I would get a necklace from Jack, then I would lock it up in a safe, chain myself to it and shoot everyone who gets within arms reach! xD

Nice start! ^w^
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baconwizard85 Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student Writer
sounds normal :3
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deadlynightshade97 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014   Writer
lol
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Dragon5032 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
A wild Jack appeared!
Wild E.J. used GIVE THE DARN NECKLACE BACK!
Whitney used Cry
Winner: Eyeless Jack
He won, the necklace, and 500 Poke~
THE END BAM NAILED IT T^T
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XXxSilverBladexXX Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice one XD
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