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~5 days Later~

Jack's POV

I was walking through the woods heading back to (Name)'s house. I guess you can say the past five days have been the best days of my life. My life felt like the perfect fairy tale. Kinda like beauty and the beast, how a human girl fell in love with a monster.

Once I reach her house I climb up the balcony and into her room, but she wasn't there. I walk over to the bed and see a note she had left. 'Jack, I had to step out real quick but I'll be back soon. Love, (Name) P.S. Don't let my parents see you.' I put the note down and decide to hide in her closet until she got home. I took off my mask and suddenly I smelled....blood? I put my mask back on and follow the sent.

I take a deep breath through my nose and confirm my thoughts. There was blood, and lots of it. The closer I got to her bedroom door the stronger the smell became. I open the door and was just hit with a whole wave of the smell. I walk into the hall and the smell became stronger and stronger. I stared see to small blood spatters on the wall as I got closer to the stairs. I walk down the stairs and into the living and was shocked at what I saw. Blood was every where and sitting on the floor was a man and woman, both torn to pieces. Their bodies were dismembered and their torsos were ripped to shreds. They were barley recognizable. I knew instantly they were (Name)'s parents. She's going to be heartbroken when she comes home.

Suddenly I felt this sharp pain in my body and I was against the wall. I look up and see the cause of this gruesome scene. "Zalgo!" I said aggressively. He looked down at me and I could tell he was not happy. "First Hoodie, then Ben, and now...you." he said with his demonic voice. "I didn't make you immortal Jack just so you could fall in love with a mortal!" "Then why did you let me keep my heart?!" "I should have ripped it out the day I found you! When you were just a pathetic little demon starving to death!" "What are gonna do? Turn me into a human? Oh, that's right. You can't!" He growled. "No matter, I've done what I came to do. You know, you should really wipe that blood off your mask." And then he was gone. 'Blood on my mask?' I take my fingers and put them on my mask. I pull them away and see that Zalgo was right. There was blood on my mask. He must have put it there when he hit me. Suddenly all I hear is "JACK WHY?!"
Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuunnnnnnnnn.
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creepypastafreak241 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015  New member
:iconfacepalmplz: WHY IS READER-CHAN SO SSSSTTTUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPIIIIIIIIIIIID! UGH.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015   Writer
idk
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LinkFan15 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  Hobbyist Filmographer
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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felishathewolf1 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK YOU ZALGO
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014   Writer
0_0
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felishathewolf1 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Lol
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Tiiccky Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014  Student Artist
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

----5 hours later---- 

UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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felishathewolf1 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
LOL
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2014   Writer
LOL
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Dragon5032 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
FUUU I KNEW IT WAS YOU ZALGO
Zalgo: *raises claws/hand whateva! in air* what! I DIDNT DO ANYTHING! kinda...
Me: I ALREADY READ ONE DAMN STORY AND IM STILL MAD AT YOU!!!
Zalgo: erm...
Me: DIIIEE *turns into a dragon and starts biting him*
Zalgo: GAAH BAD DRAGON SIT!!!! SSIIITT!!!!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014   Writer
LMAO
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jeffthkillergirl Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuccccccccccccccccccckkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk! I seen that coming.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014   Writer
ou did
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Home7654 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
At the end I was like
Me: ME Y U STUUUUUUUUUUUPIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIID????? JACK JUST CUTS THEIR GUTS OPEN WHY THE FUCK WOULD HE TEAR THEM APART YOU IDIOT GET BAAAAACK HERE! Ugh. Sorry Jack
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014   Writer
LOL
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Pastalover135 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014   Artist
Me: Jack, did you do this?* points at gruesome murder*
Jack: *points at Zalgo like a 4-year-old* Don't look at me! He did it!
Me: Thanks for the information *looks at Zalgo with my creepy eyes*
Zalgo: How can you tell that he's not lying?!
Me: *points at Zalgo's bloody hands* Then why do you have bloody hands? Jack only has a small amount of blood on his mask.*dark shadow appears over me*
Zalgo: I should start running, right?* sweat drop*
Me: Eeeeyuup!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014   Writer
LMAO
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:iconpastalover135:
Pastalover135 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014   Artist
*Elvis Presley voice* Thank you, thank you, thank you very much
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014   Writer
XD
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LinkDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Student Writer
Me: jackie, was it that dick Zalgo?! Or you sweety I won't mad.
Jack: *points at Zalgo like a 5year old* he did it.
Me:thank you sweetheart.*demon voice and eyes turn ice blue* Zalgo...you shall here by be punished for your uncool sins.
Zalgo: fuc-
Me: NO CURSING IN MY COURT!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014   Writer
LOL
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:iconlinkdrowned:
LinkDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014  Student Writer
*bows* thank you thank you
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xXShadowmayXx Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Me: Zalgo! Get your ass over here! *grabs scythe out from my shadow*

Zalgo: You dare challenge me mortal?!

Me: *dark aura appears around me* You shouldn't have said that...*smiles creepily and laughs like a madman*

My 2p(Maybelene): *shrugs* Meh. Just a normal Thursday.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014   Writer
:iconclapplz:
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:iconxxshadowmayxx:
xXShadowmayXx Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! *bows* Thank you! *bows*
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ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Zalgo!!!~ come here so you can witness the wrath of my scythe!!!!!!!!!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014   Writer
Zalgo: :iconscaredplz:
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Gaffiecat16 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me: *folds arms over my chest*
Nor: *looks at me* *looks at Zalgo*
Zalgo: *.-.* Why is the mortal staring at me like that?
Nor: *looks back to me then Zlago* Cause she's pissed at chu.
Z: :o (Eek) Plz make her stop
N: *thinks* *hops on the lolnope train*
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014   Writer
lol
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blackfirepaw Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014
me:*walk in middle of living room*

everyone: *watches with curosity*

me: ZALGO COME HERE FOR A MINUTE

zalgo: ok *walk to me*

me:*turns into a dragon and burns him*dont worry hell be back

everyone: what the hell *they are sorta scared now*
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Lokisservant Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014
One Question..: Why do i always Find you when i Look at Creepy pasta Fanfics? (Not mad just Asking if you are a Real fan of Creepypasta <3)
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blackfirepaw Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
yes just not a creepy fangirl (no offinse) 
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Lokisservant Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
Lol None Taken
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blackfirepaw Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014
ok thats good :3
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Lokisservant Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
Also i am an Obssesed Fangirl of Tom Hiddleston
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blackfirepaw Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
cool
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Lokisservant Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014
He he Tnx
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014   Writer
LOL
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blackfirepaw Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
X3 
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Bexy2000 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
Zalgo I f-ing hate you so much you *********** (lots of swear words there). *eyes blaze red and scary purple aura fumes* 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014   Writer
Yikes!
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:iconbexy2000:
Bexy2000 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014
I'm a vampire, so you'd better say away or else i will suck the fucking life outta you Zalgo you ********* (goes on forever)
And great story! :D
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014   Writer
0~0........ok
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Christianthecat Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Artist
Zalgo... You...... You.... *tilts head quickly making a snapping sound* ZaLgO.... YoUrE dEaD!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014   Writer
0_0
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xToxicFlossx Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
....zalgo you bitch........,
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MoonlightDragon369 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Bitch is to good for him...
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xToxicFlossx Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PFFFFT... True true
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MoonlightDragon369 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Wanna help me get Zalgo back~
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xToxicFlossx Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup *holds up a chainsaw* 
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