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I was walking home from Sarah's house. She wanted to help her with cleaning up her attic. I came up to my front door and reached into my pocket and pulled out my house keys. I unlock the door and open it. Before I could even take one step inside I was hit with this horrible smell. It smelled like blood and rotating meat. I walk inside and peek into the living room. That's when everything in me started to hurt. The living room looked like something out of a horror movie. Two dead bodies were dismembered on the floor and the walls were painted in blood. Something told me that the two bodies were my parents. Then I saw Jack, with blood on his mask. 'He.....killed them?' "JACK WHY?!" I screamed, tears pouring from my eyes. Something in my mind was screaming at me to run. I did.

I ran out the door and into the woods behind the house. All I could feel was sadness, grief, and betrayal. As I run deeper and deeper into the forest I could hear Jack calling for me.

"(Name)! (Name) wait, please!" I didn't stop running, I couldn't stop. I just had so much adrenaline in me. I felt someone tackle me to the ground. I was pinned to the ground and my hands were pinned down, taking away any hope if fighting back. "(Name) look at me." I hear Jack say. I keep my eyes shut and my face turned away from him. "(Name) please look at me.....please." I felt his hand on my cheek and he made me turn to him. I slowly opened my eyes. His mask was sitting on his head and he looked just as sad as I did. "I didn't kill them (Name). I would never do anything to hurt you......I love you. You know that. Zalgo killed them not me." I've never heard of anyone by the that name, but I believed him. I broke down into tears and sobbed like there was no tomorrow. I felt him pull me into a hug and I sobbed in his chest. He picked me up bridal style and started moving. I didn't know where we were going, but I was in no state to protest.  
I................regret nothing.
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LaughingAlanna Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015  Student Filmographer
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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IamCreepypastaGirl Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015
My reaction: *jaw drop* NUUU YOU F*CK*NG MORON JACK!!! YOU DIDN"T BOTHER AT ALL DID YOU?!!!! HUH?! HUH?!

Zalgo: *slowly backs away*

Me: Thats right b***h! Walk away! walk away.... 
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indiewalters16 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
'it smelled like blood and rotating meat'.... BWAHAHAHAHA!! *wipes tears of laughter from my eyes* Please never fix this typo! All I thought of when I read this was reader entering the house and being like "why the f**k does my house smell like blood and garlic and herb rotisserie chicken?"SHINee - Onew Emoticon 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015   Writer
Yuck
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felishathewolf1 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Zalgo can go jack off to guts like he always does every single day of our LIVES
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014   Writer
LOL
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felishathewolf1 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
XD
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Dragon5032 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014
... Still seething mad... Zalgo.... if theres even ONE STORY OUT DERE WITH THE READER ripping off your
head/heads(?) I shall re-read that story over and over...
Zalgo: CALM DOWN O_O'
Me: NO..... NOT UNTIL I HAVE THE TASTE OF YOUR BLOOD IN MY MOUTH *insanse laughter*
Zalgo: For once i think i need to actually ask slenderman for help...-
Me:*back in dragon form* DIE YOU F*rest is blocked* (XD)
Zalgo: SLLENNNDEERMANNN!!!! *running*
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014   Writer
LOL
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KiraTheKitsuneGodess Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student General Artist
FUCK YOU ZALGO YOU KILL MY MOM YOU FACE ETERNAL DEATTTTTTTHHHHHH!!!!( Also I absolutely love my mom so I will turn into the devil himself to bring her back)
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Mizomim Featured By Owner May 27, 2014   Writer
I love my mom too
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KiraTheKitsuneGodess Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student General Artist
I just love her bear hugs....make me feel like I'm in heaven!
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liziaa Featured By Owner May 13, 2014
i regret not drinking the blood
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
lol i would have done that! i would have been like "JACK WHY I WAS SUPPOSED TO KILL THEM!!!!!!!" *scoops down and pools the blood in my hands and drinks it*           "........i regret nothing Jack! I only drink blood it's not that bad it tastes really good you want some?" *gives him a glass full of blood and he drinks it while i give him a half of a kidney from the torn up bodies*                                 LOL im notthat bad of a person xD ... but i would drink the blood cause i like the taste of blood... don't judge meeeeeeeeDanisnotonfire: FEELS 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner May 13, 2014   Writer
I regret nothing
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bloodmoonFANGZ13 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
words
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014   Writer
What words
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bloodmoonFANGZ13 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
random words
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014   Writer
oh
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bloodmoonFANGZ13 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
yeah he's mean
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LinkDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Student Writer
Link(oc): let us shread his body and throw them in the deepest parts of hell. He has tricked me and jack for the last time.
Me: calm down for Christ sakes.
Link(oc): don't tell a women on her period to calm down.
Me: didn't need to know that.
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:icontomboyisticcitobyfan:
Da fuq that was funny lol
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LinkDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014   Writer
LOL
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LinkDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Student Writer
Hahah
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Pastalover135 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014   Artist
Me: Zalgo, I will find you, and I will kill you.....
Random person: NUUUUU! LET ME COME WITH YOU! :c
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014   Writer
LOL
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Pastalover135 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014   Artist
That random person was my friend who really hates Zalgo c:
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014   Writer
I figured
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:iconpastalover135:
Pastalover135 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014   Artist
Your so smart. Even smarter than me....
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xXShadowmayXx Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Me: Guys. We're on witch hunt. Or in this case, a bitch hunt.

Bsmit: FINALLY! IM NOT CONSIDERED A BITCH ANYMORE! *dances very weirdly*

Me: No. You're still a bitch.

Bsmit: -_-

Me: Let's go kill Zalgo!!!

Shadow(my OC): A-Are we g-going t-to hurt h-him?

Me: No. We're going to have a tea party and wear dresses. OFCOURSEWEREGOINGTOKILLHIM!

EJ and Reader-chan: :iconfacepalmplz:
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014   Writer
LOL
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xXShadowmayXx Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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Christianthecat Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014  Student Artist

ZaLgO.... I wIlL fInD YoU AnD kIlL yOu.... :iconchainsawplz:

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ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Are you Gamzee?
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IresXx Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
Welt... -grabs a shot gun a bazooka a AK-47,a few swich blades and a mashedy- i'm off to find me a demon... -diapers in the woods-
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Lokisservant Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Welp Looks like i have to help People *Turns To Manticore Then Searches Zalgo*
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Gaffiecat16 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nor: Giggle Well, I see a Hunt has been taken up. This should be fun... *disappears into the shadows*
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Lokisservant Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
*In my mind* Woah *Then sees Something Fastly Ran Past me* GRRRRRR




I Turn to see....
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Gaffiecat16 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Zalgo!

Nor:*appears next to you, a crooked grin plastering my mask* Oh Zalgy-poo!
Zalgo: F*ck this!!!*jumps on the nope-train*
Nor: WaIt! AlL i WaNt Is To TeAr YoU aPaRt LiMb FrOm LiMb!!!
Z:scared.... "the 2nd" :nuu: Horrfied emoticon
N: hojoevilgrinplz 
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Lokisservant Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Nope...Its TICCY TOBY!! D'aww

Toby: YAY! ITS YOU AGAIN watcha doin?

Me: Hunting Zalgo

Toby: ME HELP I WANT LE HELP!

I JUST LOVE YOU GUYZ~Favorite Creepy Pastas 
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Gaffiecat16 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nor: Oh Derp Smile Hey Toby! We appreciat the help!
Happy Dance 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2014   Writer
Good luck


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Lunapawz Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Zalgo I'm gonna find you and high five you.
In the face. 
With a chainsaw
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OkatuFandmChick Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Me: *highfives you* bro? Can I help??
Zaglo: .........*backs away*
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MoonlightDragon369 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Student General Artist
Me: I WANNA JOIN!!
BEN: Zalgo, you dead!!
Zalgo: ...shit...
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OkatuFandmChick Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Me: *smiles wickedly and pulls out a chainsaw*
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MoonlightDragon369 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Me: *grins widely & roars*( FYI: I'm a dragon so i can~)
Toothless: ME TOO!! *roars*
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ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wanna help!!!! I haz scythe!!!!!! I wanna chop him into little pieces!!!!
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MoonlightDragon369 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Moonlight(me): *roars and leaps into the air* Well then, What are we waiting for?! LETS GO!
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