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Hoodie's POV

I went back to the woods with Masky, only to find myself in a fight with Slender. It wasn't easy. He kept teleporting so it was hard for me to hit him. He wrapped a tentacle
around my neck, and lifted me in the air. I was struggling to breathe. "You better have a good explanation for what happened last night!" he growled. I reached into my pocket and pulled out a switch blade. "F-f-f-fu-ck y-y-you!" and stab him. He let me go and I fell to the ground. "Hoodie!" He tried to grab me, but I quickly dodged him and stabbed him in the leg. "You wanna know the truth?!" I asked aggressively. "Fine! I fell in love with her, and there's no way I'm gonna let you take her away from me!" I wasn't afraid to tell him about (Name). I wasn't afraid of him. "You can't control me anymore Slender!" and with that, I turned and left. I headed towards (Name)'s house.

Your POV

I stayed in my room most of the day. I couldn't stop thinking about what had happened last night. So many questions just ran through my mind. I couldn't stop thinking of the man who saved me. Who was he? Why did he help me? I thought my questions would never be answered. I was lying down on my bed, staring at the ceiling. It was dark outside, but I didn't turn on the lights. I heard my window opening. I sat up and looked over, and saw the man from the woods crawl in. I'm surprised he had come in through the window. Why didn't he just ring the door bell? He looked at me and closed the window. "How's your ankle?" he asked walking towards me. "It still hurts." I reply. He sat on the bed. "That sucks." he said.
"Who are you?" I asked.
"Call me Hoodie."
"Ok....I'm..."
"(Name). I know."
"How did you know my name?"
"I know more than just your name." I began blushing and he placed his hand on mine. "I've been watching you for a long time (Name)." I began blushing even harder as he told me he knew all my favorite things. Favorite foods, places, animals, color. He knew everything about me. He even knew about my ex-boyfriend who I broke up with because he cheated on me. 'How long has he been stalking me?' I thought.
"And think..." he chuckled. "I learned all that in less than a year." he seemed proud of himself. Even though he was wearing a mask, I could tell he was smiling.
"Why?" I asked.
"Because.....I love you." He lifted his mask past his lips, leaned in, and pressed his lips against mine. I was hesitant for a moment, but before I knew it, I was kissing him back. I slowly wrapped my arms around his neck and pull him closer, deepening the kiss. He pulled away and smiled. He pulled his hood down and took of his mask completely. I blushed at how attractive he was. Gray eyes, jet black hair, and a scar running across his face. "We should get some sleep." he said softly. I nodded and laid back down. He cuddled up next to me. I laid my head on his chest and feel asleep.
I some help with how he looks. Thank you all so much :D
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:iconshywerido:
shywerido Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  New member  Writer
Welp. Thats a pretty rushed relationship.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner 6 days ago   Writer
Did not see the 'time skip 6 months '?
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:iconshywerido:
shywerido Featured By Owner 4 days ago  New member  Writer
Ohhhhhh!
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:iconflameprincelover:
flamePrincelover Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  New member
About time hoodie needs a girl
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015   Writer
Yes
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I'm confused.people say hoodie has curly black hair with green eyes,but this is gray eyes with black hair and a scar on his face. Whaaaaaa?
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014   Writer
idk
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Idk either
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:iconmabelxpines13:
mabelxpines13 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
His real name is brian and he is having light brown hair and his eyes are green and he dont have a scar on his face... btw..
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014   Writer
Oh well too late to change it
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:iconbudderisveryspecial:
Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
This is priceless!!!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014   Writer
Thanks
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:iconbudderisveryspecial:
Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
:3
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
CUDLES WITH HOODIE!!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014   Writer
:3
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
^_^ hello....
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014   Writer
Hi
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2014
XDXD
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:iconmugirl7523:
mugirl7523 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey if you on to YouTube type in marble hornets entry 84 the guy named Brian is hoodie and it shows his face just btw....
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PieKitty Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014   Writer
ok
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:iconrainbowdash2099575:
rainbowdash2099575 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014   Artisan Crafter
Cuddlez!!! >w<
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014   Writer
^w^
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211darkness Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Student General Artist
AW so cute :3 I think Hoodie's real name is Brian though
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014   Writer
I didn't know until after both hoodie and masky that they had real names
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InsaneCupcak Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
A-awwww I can't stop smiling... If I met Hoody in the forest the first thing I would do is run up to him and hug him!! :)Kawaii Mouse (Being Kawaii) [V1] Rabbito Blush Emoticons Silamka Blush Yui (Very Happy Blush) [V1] 
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014   Writer
Kawaii
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:iconhalohorse:
HaloHorse Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't say I'm not smiling and blushing IRL.

This. Is. AMAZING.

Hoodie is my fave creepypasta! I love this! I love this story so far!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner May 14, 2014   Writer
Thanks you
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:iconhalohorse:
HaloHorse Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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YukiSakuraHime Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
wow :happybounce:  go hoodie go!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014   Writer
Yay
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:iconmoonangel111:
moonangel111 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Readers parents are useless...or dead....well...
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014   Writer
Or not included
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:iconmoonangel111:
moonangel111 Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yup
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:iconfluffyshadowpaw:
FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish I could enjoy this story more but I'm not feeling good and have to keep moving so I don't end up puking on the laptop.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   Writer
Awww
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:iconfluffyshadowpaw:
FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. Stupid belly
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xDarkBunnyx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
D'AWWWWWWWW HOODIE BAE ~<3 Take that Masky >:3
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   Writer
:3
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:iconcrocat:
Crocat Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I seriously wonder how Jodie looks like under his black mask
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014   Writer
I still do.
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:iconcrocat:
Crocat Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Me to
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:iconcrocat:
Crocat Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hoodie* DAMN YOU ATOU CORRECT
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:iconmissmerder1990:
missmerder1990 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2014  Student Artist
haha damn auto correct gets us all when we least expect it!
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:iconcrocat:
Crocat Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol
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:iconreokushu:
Reokushu Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
*auto
Sorry...
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:iconcrocat:
Crocat Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Can't believe you have the guts to correct me,
If I ever find you , you better be scared.
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:iconreokushu:
Reokushu Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:3
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EnderTheKiller Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2013  Student Artist
love love love it
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