Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour

:iconmizomim: More from Mizomim

More from deviantART


Submitted on
July 3, 2013
File Size
3.0 KB


7,509 (10 today)
160 (who?)
Hoodie's POV

I went back to the woods with Masky, only to find myself in a fight with Slender. It wasn't easy. He kept teleporting so it was hard for me to hit him. He wrapped a tentacle
around my neck, and lifted me in the air. I was struggling to breathe. "You better have a good explanation for what happened last night!" he growled. I reached into my pocket and pulled out a switch blade. "F-f-f-fu-ck y-y-you!" and stab him. He let me go and I fell to the ground. "Hoodie!" He tried to grab me, but I quickly dodged him and stabbed him in the leg. "You wanna know the truth?!" I asked aggressively. "Fine! I fell in love with her, and there's no way I'm gonna let you take her away from me!" I wasn't afraid to tell him about (Name). I wasn't afraid of him. "You can't control me anymore Slender!" and with that, I turned and left. I headed towards (Name)'s house.

Your POV

I stayed in my room most of the day. I couldn't stop thinking about what had happened last night. So many questions just ran through my mind. I couldn't stop thinking of the man who saved me. Who was he? Why did he help me? I thought my questions would never be answered. I was lying down on my bed, staring at the ceiling. It was dark outside, but I didn't turn on the lights. I heard my window opening. I sat up and looked over, and saw the man from the woods crawl in. I'm surprised he had come in through the window. Why didn't he just ring the door bell? He looked at me and closed the window. "How's your ankle?" he asked walking towards me. "It still hurts." I reply. He sat on the bed. "That sucks." he said.
"Who are you?" I asked.
"Call me Hoodie."
"(Name). I know."
"How did you know my name?"
"I know more than just your name." I began blushing and he placed his hand on mine. "I've been watching you for a long time (Name)." I began blushing even harder as he told me he knew all my favorite things. Favorite foods, places, animals, color. He knew everything about me. He even knew about my ex-boyfriend who I broke up with because he cheated on me. 'How long has he been stalking me?' I thought.
"And think..." he chuckled. "I learned all that in less than a year." he seemed proud of himself. Even though he was wearing a mask, I could tell he was smiling.
"Why?" I asked.
"Because.....I love you." He lifted his mask past his lips, leaned in, and pressed his lips against mine. I was hesitant for a moment, but before I knew it, I was kissing him back. I slowly wrapped my arms around his neck and pull him closer, deepening the kiss. He pulled away and smiled. He pulled his hood down and took of his mask completely. I blushed at how attractive he was. Gray eyes, jet black hair, and a scar running across his face. "We should get some sleep." he said softly. I nodded and laid back down. He cuddled up next to me. I laid my head on his chest and feel asleep.
I some help with how he looks. Thank you all so much :D
Add a Comment:
mugirl7523 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey if you on to YouTube type in marble hornets entry 84 the guy named Brian is hoodie and it shows his face just btw....
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2014   Writer
rainbowdash2099575 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014   Artisan Crafter
Cuddlez!!! >w<
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014   Writer
211darkness Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Student General Artist
AW so cute :3 I think Hoodie's real name is Brian though
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014   Writer
I didn't know until after both hoodie and masky that they had real names
InsaneCupcak Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
A-awwww I can't stop smiling... If I met Hoody in the forest the first thing I would do is run up to him and hug him!! :)Kawaii Mouse (Being Kawaii) [V1] Rabbito Blush Emoticons Silamka Blush Yui (Very Happy Blush) [V1] 
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014   Writer
HaloHorse Featured By Owner May 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't say I'm not smiling and blushing IRL.

This. Is. AMAZING.

Hoodie is my fave creepypasta! I love this! I love this story so far!
Mizomim Featured By Owner May 14, 2014   Writer
Thanks you
Add a Comment: