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Its been 6 months since I met Hoodie. It took a while for me to trust him completely, and I was starting to fall in love with him. I wanted to tell him, but every time I tried something would happen. Either my neighbors were yelling at each other, or my ex-boyfriend was trying to call me. It was like mother nature was trying to stop me from telling him how I felt. Another thing that stopped me was because he wasn't here.

It was getting late and I haven't seen Hoodie all day. I was starting to get worried. I her knock at the door and walk over. I open the door thinking it was Hoodie, and got a big and unwanted surprise. It was my ex, (random name). Before he could say anything I slam the door in his face. "Aw c'mon babe, I said I was sorry." he whined from outside my house. "Go to hell!" I yell. "Can't was just talk?" "NO! Got to hell you bastard!" "Please (Name)." "FUCK OFF!" After a moment of silence I assumed he left. I checked the time. It was ten minutes till midnight. "Hoodie, where are you?" I whispered. I walk upstairs to my room, and go to bed.


When I woke up, it was still dark outside. And it felt colder in my room than usual. I sat up in bed and saw that my window was open. I got up and close it, thinking Hoodie left it open my mistake.

I suddenly found myself being pushed against the was, with a knife to my throat. My attacker was (random name). "Now (Name), you I don't want to use this. But if I have to, I will. Now be good girl and tell me you love me."


Hoodie's POV

"And I thought the Rake was stubborn." I say to my self, just getting through another fight with Slender. I came back to (Name)'s house. When I climbed through the window, I she was already asleep. I decide to go downstairs to make sure all the doors an windows were locked. I wanted to make that if Slender followed me, he wouldn't be able to get in. At least not easily.  I suddenly hear (Name) screaming. I run back upstairs and see her ex-boyfriend pinning her against the wall. I pulled him away making him fall to the floor. I pull my knife out and start stabbing him. I don't know how many times I stabbed him, but I knew he was dead. 'Oh crap, I just killed some one in her house!" I yelled in my head. 'Fuck! I know the police are gonna think she did it!'

I turned to see if she was okay, when she practically jumped on me. I took a few steps back so we wouldn't fall to the ground. "I love you." she whispered. I smiled wide under mask. I quickly pull it off and look at her. "I love you too." I said before leaning in for a kiss. We stayed in a lip lock for a little while, before I pulled away. "C'mon. Let's get out of here." I said, walking over to the window and opening it. "Where are we going?" she asked. "You'll see" I said putting my mask back on and picking her up bridal style. I leaped out the window. Once I landed, I started running. I was taking her somewhere not even Slenderman knew about. A place where she'd be safe.
Sorry it took so long ^^;
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:iconthemaskedreader:
themaskedreader Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Oh look its my ex flipalerpa. XD
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015   Writer
XD
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L2113 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
so goddamn cuteFlying Hoodie Icon Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Double kawaii wink) V6 Racing Girl Emoji (Ehehe) [V4] 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015   Writer
Glad you think so
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shywerido Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2015  New member Hobbyist
YASSSS!!!
That is so boss!
:3
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015   Writer
Da boss
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:iconharmony-destler:
Harmony-Destler Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Heart Yasuko Takasu (Fangirling) [V1] :fangirl: Neko Girl-13 (Fangirling Sparkles) [V1] Grell Sutcliff (Fangirling) [V2] Fangirl Flailing Emote Kofuku Ebisu (Fangirling) [V1] :diefantard: :barrier for bishies: It works :fangirl: Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-02 (Kawaii) [V1] Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-03 (Squee) [V1] Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-02 (Kawaii) [V1] Hamtaro Mouse Emoji-02 (Kawaii) [V1] Kofuku Ebisu (Fangirling) [V1] Fangirl Flailing Emote :dead: remake 
( died from fangirl containment)
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014   Writer
Yay
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:iconharmony-destler:
Harmony-Destler Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2014
I won't read often cause of a lot of stuff but I'll still read.
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:iconvalerievillacorta:
ValerieVillacorta Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Artist
I knew it!!!!!!!! This was going to be good!!!!!! :-):-) :-)
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014   Writer
:)
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EllamentraMagic Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well that escalated quickly.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014   Writer
yes
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FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I LIKE THIS! Damn it! I keep almost puking
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   Writer
Don't puke
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:iconfluffyshadowpaw:
FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
my belly is killing me and I keep laughing ^^;
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xDarkBunnyx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
D'AWWWWWWWW SOOOO FREAKING CUTE!!!!!! ~<333 *cough cough* Still a better love story than Twilight *cough cough* Not to be confused with my OC Twilight, but the overdramatic series of movies :3
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   Writer
Any love story is better than twilight
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Happyluckygirl22 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THE GOD DAMN RAPE SCEAN
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014   Writer
I don't do rape just like I don't do love triangles
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StealthElf Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
VERY LEGIT PROOF!
:iconjarplz::iconplusplz::iconjaylenoplz::iconequalsplz: Better love story than Twilight
I ship them so much, I helicraft it!
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xDarkBunnyx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
That...is a very true statement xD
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:iconbenartlover:
BENartlover Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah....ignoring that my 2nd kiss was over a dead body and that i wasn't scared...IT WAS FRICKING AWESOME!!!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014   Writer
Thank you
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:iconbenartlover:
BENartlover Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :D
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SympathyfortheDevil9 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Kissing over a dead body O_o
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014   Writer
Weird right.....
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flyinhawaiian33 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I told my ex this and he is like a big bro to me we only broke it off cause we didnt want to hate each other afterwards..... but he was like well dosnt evryone wanna kill me today I laughed and then I stopped cuse he was lookin at me wierd
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013   Writer
lol
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SpyroCynder2002 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵😵
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013   Writer
:B
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Tabookitty10 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh well atleast I have a pet cactus to throw at random people that I don't like 
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013   Writer
XD
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Tabookitty10 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*looks over shoulder* omg stop stalking me !!!for god sakes exes are so freaking creepy
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013   Writer
0_0....tell me about it.
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:iconblazequakes:
blazequakes Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Student Writer
Hoodie thats not exectly romantic and how would the police know you killed him
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013   Writer
......
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Crazygirl1519 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
Why do I feel like France ?
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013   Writer
I dunno, why do you?
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:iconcrazygirl1519:
Crazygirl1519 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Don't know
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013   Writer
Oh well.
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Ayeni-chan Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013  Student Photographer
Oh my~  :Big eyes:

It's so cute! Onigiri
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2013   Writer
:iconiloveyouplz:
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Ayeni-chan Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Student Photographer
Caramel dansen emote
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Maskyproxy1 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So awesome

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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013   Writer
Thanks :D
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seerofheros Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
My oc soma would do much worse
Soma: I would get him off me and get a base ball bat and beat his head in!!! UNTILL IT LOOKED LIKE IT WASN'T HUMAN
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013   Writer
0_0
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seerofheros Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Yea she doesn't take bull from others Soma: damn straight
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wallavan000 Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The fock we have a ton of creepy stalkers. What have we been doing?
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