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Its been 6 months since I met Hoodie. It took a while for me to trust him completely, and I was starting to fall in love with him. I wanted to tell him, but every time I tried something would happen. Either my neighbors were yelling at each other, or my ex-boyfriend was trying to call me. It was like mother nature was trying to stop me from telling him how I felt. Another thing that stopped me was because he wasn't here.

It was getting late and I haven't seen Hoodie all day. I was starting to get worried. I her knock at the door and walk over. I open the door thinking it was Hoodie, and got a big and unwanted surprise. It was my ex, (random name). Before he could say anything I slam the door in his face. "Aw c'mon babe, I said I was sorry." he whined from outside my house. "Go to hell!" I yell. "Can't was just talk?" "NO! Got to hell you bastard!" "Please (Name)." "FUCK OFF!" After a moment of silence I assumed he left. I checked the time. It was ten minutes till midnight. "Hoodie, where are you?" I whispered. I walk upstairs to my room, and go to bed.


When I woke up, it was still dark outside. And it felt colder in my room than usual. I sat up in bed and saw that my window was open. I got up and close it, thinking Hoodie left it open my mistake.

I suddenly found myself being pushed against the was, with a knife to my throat. My attacker was (random name). "Now (Name), you I don't want to use this. But if I have to, I will. Now be good girl and tell me you love me."


Hoodie's POV

"And I thought the Rake was stubborn." I say to my self, just getting through another fight with Slender. I came back to (Name)'s house. When I climbed through the window, I she was already asleep. I decide to go downstairs to make sure all the doors an windows were locked. I wanted to make that if Slender followed me, he wouldn't be able to get in. At least not easily.  I suddenly hear (Name) screaming. I run back upstairs and see her ex-boyfriend pinning her against the wall. I pulled him away making him fall to the floor. I pull my knife out and start stabbing him. I don't know how many times I stabbed him, but I knew he was dead. 'Oh crap, I just killed some one in her house!" I yelled in my head. 'Fuck! I know the police are gonna think she did it!'

I turned to see if she was okay, when she practically jumped on me. I took a few steps back so we wouldn't fall to the ground. "I love you." she whispered. I smiled wide under mask. I quickly pull it off and look at her. "I love you too." I said before leaning in for a kiss. We stayed in a lip lock for a little while, before I pulled away. "C'mon. Let's get out of here." I said, walking over to the window and opening it. "Where are we going?" she asked. "You'll see" I said putting my mask back on and picking her up bridal style. I leaped out the window. Once I landed, I started running. I was taking her somewhere not even Slenderman knew about. A place where she'd be safe.
Sorry it took so long ^^;
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ValerieVillacorta Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Artist
I knew it!!!!!!!! This was going to be good!!!!!! :-):-) :-)
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014   Writer
:)
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EllamentraMagic Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well that escalated quickly.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014   Writer
yes
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FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I LIKE THIS! Damn it! I keep almost puking
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   Writer
Don't puke
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FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
my belly is killing me and I keep laughing ^^;
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xDarkBunnyx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
D'AWWWWWWWW SOOOO FREAKING CUTE!!!!!! ~<333 *cough cough* Still a better love story than Twilight *cough cough* Not to be confused with my OC Twilight, but the overdramatic series of movies :3
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   Writer
Any love story is better than twilight
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Happyluckygirl22 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
THE GOD DAMN RAPE SCEAN
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