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Its been 6 months since I met Hoodie. It took a while for me to trust him completely, and I was starting to fall in love with him. I wanted to tell him, but every time I tried something would happen. Either my neighbors were yelling at each other, or my ex-boyfriend was trying to call me. It was like mother nature was trying to stop me from telling him how I felt. Another thing that stopped me was because he wasn't here.

It was getting late and I haven't seen Hoodie all day. I was starting to get worried. I her knock at the door and walk over. I open the door thinking it was Hoodie, and got a big and unwanted surprise. It was my ex, (random name). Before he could say anything I slam the door in his face. "Aw c'mon babe, I said I was sorry." he whined from outside my house. "Go to hell!" I yell. "Can't was just talk?" "NO! Got to hell you bastard!" "Please (Name)." "FUCK OFF!" After a moment of silence I assumed he left. I checked the time. It was ten minutes till midnight. "Hoodie, where are you?" I whispered. I walk upstairs to my room, and go to bed.

When I woke up, it was still dark outside. And it felt colder in my room than usual. I sat up in bed and saw that my window was open. I got up and close it, thinking Hoodie left it open my mistake.

I suddenly found myself being pushed against the was, with a knife to my throat. My attacker was (random name). "Now (Name), you I don't want to use this. But if I have to, I will. Now be good girl and tell me you love me."

Hoodie's POV

"And I thought the Rake was stubborn." I say to my self, just getting through another fight with Slender. I came back to (Name)'s house. When I climbed through the window, I she was already asleep. I decide to go downstairs to make sure all the doors an windows were locked. I wanted to make that if Slender followed me, he wouldn't be able to get in. At least not easily.  I suddenly hear (Name) screaming. I run back upstairs and see her ex-boyfriend pinning her against the wall. I pulled him away making him fall to the floor. I pull my knife out and start stabbing him. I don't know how many times I stabbed him, but I knew he was dead. 'Oh crap, I just killed some one in her house!" I yelled in my head. 'Fuck! I know the police are gonna think she did it!'

I turned to see if she was okay, when she practically jumped on me. I took a few steps back so we wouldn't fall to the ground. "I love you." she whispered. I smiled wide under mask. I quickly pull it off and look at her. "I love you too." I said before leaning in for a kiss. We stayed in a lip lock for a little while, before I pulled away. "C'mon. Let's get out of here." I said, walking over to the window and opening it. "Where are we going?" she asked. "You'll see" I said putting my mask back on and picking her up bridal style. I leaped out the window. Once I landed, I started running. I was taking her somewhere not even Slenderman knew about. A place where she'd be safe.
Sorry it took so long ^^;
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ValerieVillacorta Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014  Student Artist
I knew it!!!!!!!! This was going to be good!!!!!! :-):-) :-)
Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2014   Writer
EllamentraMagic Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
well that escalated quickly.
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014   Writer
FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I LIKE THIS! Damn it! I keep almost puking
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   Writer
Don't puke
FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
my belly is killing me and I keep laughing ^^;
xDarkBunnyx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
D'AWWWWWWWW SOOOO FREAKING CUTE!!!!!! ~<333 *cough cough* Still a better love story than Twilight *cough cough* Not to be confused with my OC Twilight, but the overdramatic series of movies :3
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   Writer
Any love story is better than twilight
Happyluckygirl22 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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