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I woke up on what felt like grass. I blink my eyes a couple time to let them adjust to my surroundings. Once my vision was clear, I see that I'm.....under a willow tree? The vines were touching the ground, and they were so thick I couldn't see anything behind them. I try to get up, but I felt something wrapped around my waste. Hoodie's arm was wrapped around me tight. Then I remember what had happened last night. My crazy ex-boyfriend tried to make me love him, but Hoodie killed him. The police were probably gonna think I did it. Which means I wouldn't be able to go back home. I hear Hoodie yawn and felt him kiss my neck. "You awake?" he asked. "Yeah, I'm up."

He climbed on top of me, I started blushing. And he wasn't wearing his mask. "Sleep well?" he asked. "Y-Yeah. And you?" "I slept good." He got off me and helped me to my feet. "C'mon." he said. "I wanna show you something." He grabbed my hand and we started walking towards the vines. He pushed them out of the way so we could get through without getting tangled. Once were past the vines, my jaw dropped.

All I could see was a small lake, surrounded by trees and flowers. It was so beautiful. "Its so beautiful." I said. "Not as beautiful as you." Hoodie said, slowly wrapping his arms around me. "Is this where you live?" I asked. "Not really. Sometimes I come here to get away from all the bullshit in my life." He took my hand and we started walking towards the edge of the lake. We sat down about two feet away from the water. "What kind of bullshit are we talking about Hoodie?"
"Sometimes I come here to get away from Slender, or Jeff, or BEN, or anyone else that gets in my nerves."
"Is that it?"
"Yeah, that's pretty much it. I like it because I'm the only on who knows about this place. Not even Slender knows about it."
"Do you ever get scared that they might find it?"
"Sometimes, but I always make sure I'm not being followed. Do you like it?"
"Yes I love it."
"I'm glad you do. Cause its the only place I know you'll be safe."

He scooted closer to me and put his arm around my shoulder. "(Name)." "Yeah?" "I love you." "I love you too." He gently placed his hand on my cheek, and started kissing me passionately. I happily kissed back.

I felt happy and safe, like nothing could go wrong.

????? POV

I see Hoodie has found himself a girl. I wonder if Slender knows about this. She's pretty. A little too pretty for him, if you ask me. And he doesn't seem good enough for her either. But she seems perfect for me. Sorry Hoodie, but your gonna have to find another girl. Cause I'm taking this one.
Part 5: Out know. Part 6: Coming soon.

Hope you like it.
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  New member Student Writer
I'm calling it: rake XD he's like the one u nvr expect to show up and love a girl XD
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014   Writer
TeppitGirl Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
I bet it's eyeless jack :3 or there's a SMALL chance that it's jeff but I'm pretty sure it isn't so it's jack
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014   Writer
You'll see
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
I bet you its masky
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014   Writer
you'll see
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
Your so cute maskylover:3
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
You know I am a female too....right? But thanks
Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
I didn't know that O=O and your welcome:)
( also I'm sorry to tell you this but I'm also female as well)
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