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I woke up on what felt like grass. I blink my eyes a couple time to let them adjust to my surroundings. Once my vision was clear, I see that I'm.....under a willow tree? The vines were touching the ground, and they were so thick I couldn't see anything behind them. I try to get up, but I felt something wrapped around my waste. Hoodie's arm was wrapped around me tight. Then I remember what had happened last night. My crazy ex-boyfriend tried to make me love him, but Hoodie killed him. The police were probably gonna think I did it. Which means I wouldn't be able to go back home. I hear Hoodie yawn and felt him kiss my neck. "You awake?" he asked. "Yeah, I'm up."

He climbed on top of me, I started blushing. And he wasn't wearing his mask. "Sleep well?" he asked. "Y-Yeah. And you?" "I slept good." He got off me and helped me to my feet. "C'mon." he said. "I wanna show you something." He grabbed my hand and we started walking towards the vines. He pushed them out of the way so we could get through without getting tangled. Once were past the vines, my jaw dropped.

All I could see was a small lake, surrounded by trees and flowers. It was so beautiful. "Its so beautiful." I said. "Not as beautiful as you." Hoodie said, slowly wrapping his arms around me. "Is this where you live?" I asked. "Not really. Sometimes I come here to get away from all the bullshit in my life." He took my hand and we started walking towards the edge of the lake. We sat down about two feet away from the water. "What kind of bullshit are we talking about Hoodie?"
"Sometimes I come here to get away from Slender, or Jeff, or BEN, or anyone else that gets in my nerves."
"Is that it?"
"Yeah, that's pretty much it. I like it because I'm the only on who knows about this place. Not even Slender knows about it."
"Do you ever get scared that they might find it?"
"Sometimes, but I always make sure I'm not being followed. Do you like it?"
"Yes I love it."
"I'm glad you do. Cause its the only place I know you'll be safe."

He scooted closer to me and put his arm around my shoulder. "(Name)." "Yeah?" "I love you." "I love you too." He gently placed his hand on my cheek, and started kissing me passionately. I happily kissed back.

I felt happy and safe, like nothing could go wrong.


????? POV

I see Hoodie has found himself a girl. I wonder if Slender knows about this. She's pretty. A little too pretty for him, if you ask me. And he doesn't seem good enough for her either. But she seems perfect for me. Sorry Hoodie, but your gonna have to find another girl. Cause I'm taking this one.
Part 5: Out know. Part 6: Coming soon.

Hope you like it.
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:iconprettyblood14:
Prettyblood14 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2015
Excuse me unknown person at the end of this part, I'm staying with Hoodie.
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:iconlaughingalanna:
LaughingAlanna Featured By Owner May 18, 2015  New Deviant Student Filmographer
Fuck you jeff!
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:iconhoodiebelongstome:
HoodieBelongsToMe Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2015
I may be fab but hoodie is good enough, who be the bitch that say Hoodie aint goddam fab
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015   Writer
You'd be surprised. . . . .
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:iconxdawnfirelightx:
xDawnFirelightx Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015  Hobbyist Photographer
Soon, EVERY creepy pasta will be falling for me!

im so beautiful.....
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2015   Writer
yes
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:iconedwardrichtofen93511:
EdwardRichtofen93511 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
10 $ says rake
Just kidding
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2015   Writer
LOL
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:iconflameprincelover:
flamePrincelover Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015
Eyeless Jack
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015   Writer
No
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:iconmetalbladez00940902:
MetalBladez00940902 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
((OH, HELL NO!!! [horror movie reference with a black chick who's just all like 'OH HELL NO' when she opens the door and sees a demon staring at her.]))
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015   Writer
lol
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:iconmetalbladez00940902:
MetalBladez00940902 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
((IKR?))
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I'm calling it: rake XD he's like the one u nvr expect to show up and love a girl XD
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014   Writer
Lol
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:iconteppitgirl:
TeppitGirl Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
I bet it's eyeless jack :3 or there's a SMALL chance that it's jeff but I'm pretty sure it isn't so it's jack
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014   Writer
You'll see
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
I bet you its masky
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014   Writer
you'll see
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
BLARG ITS NOT HIM!! SEEDEATER!!!
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:iconbudderisveryspecial:
Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
Your so cute maskylover:3
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
You know I am a female too....right? But thanks
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:iconbudderisveryspecial:
Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
I didn't know that O=O and your welcome:)
( also I'm sorry to tell you this but I'm also female as well)
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
Thank youuuuuuuuuu!!!! :3
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:iconbudderisveryspecial:
Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
:3
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
O=o
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:iconbudderisveryspecial:
Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014
Are you okay? Do I need to get hoodie to help me?
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:iconheyitsmev:
HeyItsMeV Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Just sayin', there's a HUGE difference between grabbing someone's waist and grabbing someone's waste.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014   Writer
..............
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:iconheyitsmev:
HeyItsMeV Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your waist is that area on your sides just above your hips. Your WASTE is things like feces. It's what your body has leftover after it pulls the nutrients out of the food you've eaten. I don't think Hoodie would willingly wrap his arms around someone's shit..
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014   Writer
thanks for making me look like an idiot
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:iconheyitsmev:
HeyItsMeV Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
If you learned to differentiate then I wouldn't have made you look like an idiot. And by the way, there are things called "capitalization" and "punctuation." You should look into them. Wink/Razz 
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silvermistwolf14 Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014
thats kinda a rude way to tell someone something...
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GLlTTERshit Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Jeff
I'm willing to place fifty (imaginary) dollars on the table
That it's Jeff



I can almost smell the Jeffyness.
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:iconeyelessjackloverbae:
EyelessJackLoverBae Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014
I can smell the Jeffyness to
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Is it masky? Cuz I think it is!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014   Writer
no
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:iconinsanecupcak:
InsaneCupcak Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
Typo
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014   Writer
Ok
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:iconinsanecupcak:
InsaneCupcak Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2014
IMTHINK IT WAS MASKY!!! :looloo
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014   Writer
No
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:iconayanna-vvision:
ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think its BEN, Jeff, or EJ for some reason. But even weirder i have a slightly stronger feeling it Seedeater.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014   Writer
You have a good feeling
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:iconayanna-vvision:
ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I was going to say laughing Jack but there was no laughing
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:iconanimelover5656:
AnimeLover5656 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
hmmm willow under the willow tree in a big meadow with a lake 
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:iconastrangertothemind:
AStrangerToTheMind Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  New Deviant
Nuu u took one of my OC names! Or you ARE my OC! 😱
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:iconanimelover5656:
AnimeLover5656 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2015
maybe i am your oc o.o or your oc is me o.o cause i was born with this name so whichever comes first
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014   Writer
That could be a poem
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:iconanimelover5656:
AnimeLover5656 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
its funny cuz im da reader(willow) and im under da willow tree x3
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:iconfluffyshadowpaw:
FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
SHIZ WHOS TRYIN TO TAKE MEH?!?! I do not go lightly with dat! Zach was a dick and Jack was a dick also!
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