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Hoodie left to get me some food. Even though I wasn't really hungry. But I knew that I had to eat something. I sat at the edge of the lake tossing small rocks into the water. I did this for a while, when I felt that I wasn't alone. I got to my feet and looked around, thinking Hoodie had come back. But the was no sign of him.

"Hello (Name)." said a deep, strange and scary voice.

I look to the left and my heart started pounding. Standing just feet away from me was a creature with a long face, almost like a bird with what looked like pieces of skin sown on it. It had long arms and legs with claws, and black hair on its body. What scared me the most was the blood on its mouth. I took a step a back. "Scared?" it asked. I nodded. "Don't be." it said coming closer to me. "I won't hurt you. Unless I have to."
Every time it took a step closer to me, I would take a step back. Before I knew it, the creature ran behind me. I spun around to face it. "Now, now (Name). Don't be difficult." it said. It extended it's arm and tried to touch me. I ran the other way. Trying to put as much distance between me and that thing. But it ran ahead of me and stopped. Causing me to scream and fall to the ground. "You can't run from me (Name). By the way, I'm Seedeater."


~Before we continue. I really like how some of you though it was Jeff, Jack, or Masky. And I shall tell you that its NEITHER. Its Seedeater. Seedeater is the one who wants to take you away from Hoodie! And know back to the story.~

~Narration~

As Seedeater slowly made his way to a now terrified (Name), some thing got in his away. A tall 15 foot creature, with long black hair covering its body, and big white eyes had place its foot in front of (Name). It was The Strider. It looked at Seedeater and growled. Warning him not to take a step closer. "God damn it Strider!" Seedeater yelled. "Why can't you mind your own business?!" Strider just growled, but this time more threatening. Before Seedeater could reply, Hoodie had come and punched him in the face. Hoodie than ran over to (Name) to see if she was ok. Seedeater became angry and tried run over to them. Only to be stopped once again by Strider, using his other foot to stop him. He nearly stepped on Seedeater, but he didn't care. Strider was growling even louder and was showing his teeth. "You'll pay for this!" Seedeater mumbled and ran off. Once he was gone Strider began to calm down. He turned to Hoodie and (Name). "Thanks Strider." Hoodie said. "I owe you one." Strider sat down in his knees and put his head in front of (Name). "He wants you to pet him." Hoodie explained. (Name) started rubbing her hand on top of Strider's head, making him purr. She seemed very happy. Hoodie was too, but he was also worried. Seedeater had found his secret place and tried to take (Name). Now where was he going to hide her? He would have to think of something, and quick.
I'm not kidding. I really loved how you all tried to guess who the mystery character was. And know you who it is ^^
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WaterElement33 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I honestly thought it was Ticci-Toby. I don't know why..
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014   Writer
That's ok
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crazyhorse1213 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I thought it was BEN. In most stories I read it has some 'BEN trying to make the reader his' time in it.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014   Writer
Ikr
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crazyhorse1213 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Heh, Yep. 
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EyelessEssencee Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
I thought it was Masky, lol.
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maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014  New member
Same :3
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014   Writer
lol
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Osantasu Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well crap
I was wrong.

*Takes my fifty imaginary dollars back and sneaks away*
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014   Writer
lol
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