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Hoodie left to get me some food. Even though I wasn't really hungry. But I knew that I had to eat something. I sat at the edge of the lake tossing small rocks into the water. I did this for a while, when I felt that I wasn't alone. I got to my feet and looked around, thinking Hoodie had come back. But the was no sign of him.

"Hello (Name)." said a deep, strange and scary voice.

I look to the left and my heart started pounding. Standing just feet away from me was a creature with a long face, almost like a bird with what looked like pieces of skin sown on it. It had long arms and legs with claws, and black hair on its body. What scared me the most was the blood on its mouth. I took a step a back. "Scared?" it asked. I nodded. "Don't be." it said coming closer to me. "I won't hurt you. Unless I have to."
Every time it took a step closer to me, I would take a step back. Before I knew it, the creature ran behind me. I spun around to face it. "Now, now (Name). Don't be difficult." it said. It extended it's arm and tried to touch me. I ran the other way. Trying to put as much distance between me and that thing. But it ran ahead of me and stopped. Causing me to scream and fall to the ground. "You can't run from me (Name). By the way, I'm Seedeater."


~Before we continue. I really like how some of you though it was Jeff, Jack, or Masky. And I shall tell you that its NEITHER. Its Seedeater. Seedeater is the one who wants to take you away from Hoodie! And know back to the story.~

~Narration~

As Seedeater slowly made his way to a now terrified (Name), some thing got in his away. A tall 15 foot creature, with long black hair covering its body, and big white eyes had place its foot in front of (Name). It was The Strider. It looked at Seedeater and growled. Warning him not to take a step closer. "God damn it Strider!" Seedeater yelled. "Why can't you mind your own business?!" Strider just growled, but this time more threatening. Before Seedeater could reply, Hoodie had come and punched him in the face. Hoodie than ran over to (Name) to see if she was ok. Seedeater became angry and tried run over to them. Only to be stopped once again by Strider, using his other foot to stop him. He nearly stepped on Seedeater, but he didn't care. Strider was growling even louder and was showing his teeth. "You'll pay for this!" Seedeater mumbled and ran off. Once he was gone Strider began to calm down. He turned to Hoodie and (Name). "Thanks Strider." Hoodie said. "I owe you one." Strider sat down in his knees and put his head in front of (Name). "He wants you to pet him." Hoodie explained. (Name) started rubbing her hand on top of Strider's head, making him purr. She seemed very happy. Hoodie was too, but he was also worried. Seedeater had found his secret place and tried to take (Name). Now where was he going to hide her? He would have to think of something, and quick.
I'm not kidding. I really loved how you all tried to guess who the mystery character was. And know you who it is ^^
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FoxyThePirateFoxyy Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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shywerido Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist
I have no idea who Seedeater is... :(
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cweepypastalover Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015
lol yayyyy strider to the rescue :potatoman: 
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EmmalineHaesel Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
Cool story, but urgh, Homestuck... I see 'Strider' and I know you mean the CreepyPasta, but I first think of blondes in aviators and anime shades.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015   Writer
I get that
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EmmalineHaesel Featured By Owner May 22, 2015
'Condensation' at breakfast came out 'Condescension' and I mentally facepalmed.
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Dragonwolf505 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Swag
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015   Writer
Yus
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jasper0423 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015
Who is strider anyways *very new to creepy pasta*
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015   Writer
A giant hairy monster with big white eyes that stalks people until they die
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jasper0423 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015
Thanks :3 want to be friends?
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015   Writer
Sure
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jasper0423 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015
Woooohooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!
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TeppitGirl Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2014
Oh my gosh :((( seedeater is probablly the only creepypasta that literally freaks me out. Oh why ;( why couldn't it have been another creepypasta!! It could have been the rake or zalgo I wouldn't have mind. But u had to choose seedeater out of all of them -.- but when I find out strider protects me in it, it makes up for it. Bc I always thot he was pretty cool  


love the story
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Dragonwolf505 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Z-z-zalgo?...
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TeppitGirl Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2015
Yes. .-. U don't understand how much seed eater creeps me out
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014   Writer
He creeps me out too
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fayth5656 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Honestly,I got really confused by the description,so I couldn't guess who it was.But on part 5,I thought it was Masky.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014   Writer
OK
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Missem111003 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I thought it was one of the animal creepypastas! *takes my imaginary friends 50 dollars*
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014   Writer
A bet?
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Missem111003 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah. It was between me and Thomas, my imaginary friend. He is my only friend while I'm on deviantart. He is reading over my shoulder as we speak. *shoves Thomas* Tommy, stop being creepy! Can you be my deviantart friend? Thomas gets annoying at times. *Thomas shoves me* Okay, okay, Thomas, calm down!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014   Writer
Cute
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Missem111003 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. Thomas is pleased that you took him seriously. He wants to know if you would like to join our group, Creepypastas-Welcome. :)
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014   Writer
Sure
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Missem111003 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I am sending you a invite because for a strange reason the join group button isn't appearing. Thomas approves. ;)
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2014   Writer
Thanks
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WaterElement33 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I honestly thought it was Ticci-Toby. I don't know why..
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014   Writer
That's ok
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crazyhorse1213 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I thought it was BEN. In most stories I read it has some 'BEN trying to make the reader his' time in it.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014   Writer
Ikr
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crazyhorse1213 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Heh, Yep. 
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EyelessEssencee Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014
I thought it was Masky, lol.
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maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2014
Same :3
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014   Writer
lol
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GLlTTERshit Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well crap
I was wrong.

*Takes my fifty imaginary dollars back and sneaks away*
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014   Writer
lol
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GLlTTERshit Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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Slender-Bitch Featured By Owner May 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The first two people who came to my mind was Jeff and BEN.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner May 29, 2014   Writer
neither
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Slender-Bitch Featured By Owner May 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:(
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vikhop Featured By Owner May 11, 2014  Student Interface Designer
aaaw do a X reader with seedeater pleaaaase??? Q~Q *puppy eyes, waving tail* 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner May 12, 2014   Writer
Maybe....im not a big fan of seedeater
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GeekGurl234 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
Is it weird if I find Seedeater sweet in some way? I heard he's been seen in Canada and Im there so.. Yeah.... :3
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014   Writer
I like seedeater.....
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GeekGurl234 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
YUS!
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FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
aww we have to leave dis pretty lake?
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2014   Writer
yup
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Happyluckygirl22 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Omg strider reminds me of dave
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