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Hoodie's POV

It's been three days since Seedeater came. I was really worried that he might tell Slender where I am. But was mostly worried about (Name). Why would Seedeater want take her away from me? What did I ever do to him? I was just happy Strider would stay with her when ever I left.

I woke up early to look for a new place to keep (Name) safe. But it wasn't long before Slender found me. He wrapped his tentacles around my arms and legs. No matter how hard I tried, I couldn't break free. "Damn it Slender!" I yelled. "Hoodie, relax" he said. "Let me go you son of a bitch!" "Calm down and I'll let you go." I did as he said, but he still had me in his grip. "What do you want?" I asked. "I just wanna talk." "Really?" I didn't believe him. "I only fought you because I wanted to see if you were serious."
"About what?"
"About that girl. I wanted to see if you really did care about her."
"Wait. You were testing me?"
"Yes."
"So me standing up to you wasn't enough?"
"No it wasn't. That's why I fought you all those times."
"So, your not gonna kill her?"
"No Hoodie. If she means that much to you, I won't hurt her." I was surprised at this. I thought he was really pissed at me. And he finally let me go.
"Now what's this about a secret lake Seedeater's been telling me about?"
"Wait, what?" 'That son of a fucking bitch! I swear to God I'm gonna smash his head against a rock!'
"Seedeater told me you were hiding her at a lake I didn't know about."
"I am, until I can I find someplace else."
"Why?"
"Seedeater came and tried to take her."
"Why would he do that? I thought he hated humans."
"I don't know, but all I know is she isn't safe there anymore."
"Is she still there?"
"Yeah, Strider is with her, so its ok."
"Alright, but maybe you should head back. I'll find out what's going on with Seedeater.
"Ok." I turn around to head back. "Uh, Slender."
"Yeah?"
"Thanks."
"No problem."

Your POV

I woke under the willow tree again, but instead of Hoodie, Strider was next to me. He must have sat next to me when Hoodie left to keep me warm. When I sat up Strider nudged my arm with his head, his own way of saying 'pet me'. I start petting him, making him purr. For a tall hairy monster, he's kinda cute.

At least two hours past and Hoodie still hadn't come back. I was getting a little worried. I suddenly hear Strider growling. He looking towards some bushes. Right before I could get to my feet, everything went black....
I know its a cliffhanger. So don't yell at me for it!
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Furry~ X33
strider my new guard-pet.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014   Writer
Yes
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:iconkitteh19:
Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
:3 I shall name him furry -w-
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fayth5656 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
CLIFFHANGER!!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2014   Writer
Yes
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:iconwiilol4u:
wiilol4u Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Student General Artist
I wanna keep Strider as a pet!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014   Writer
Who doesn't
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:iconwiilol4u:
wiilol4u Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Exactly! He'd be the best pet ever!
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CweepyCwaft101 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Terry:*reads other comments*Hoodie is cheating on me?*Cries*
Thanks a lot peeps.....you made my BFF cry.*comforts you*Im slapping hoodie......and taking his pistol.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014   Writer
lol
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:iconcweepycwaft101:
CweepyCwaft101 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Wanna help kill hoodie or comfort Terry
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014   Writer
ok
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:iconcweepycwaft101:
CweepyCwaft101 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Hey hood!!!
Hoodie:Ya?
Me:*slaps him*
Hoodie:OWW
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:iconxdarkbunnyx:
xDarkBunnyx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
Twilight (my earlier mentioned OC) : Why am I reading these again?

Laughing Jack: Cause you're crushing big time on Hoodie.

Twilight: JACK!!! NO!!! I AM NOT!!!

Jeff: Twilight likes Hoodie?!

Twilight: No!!

Jeff: HOODIE!! TWILIGHT IS IN LOVE WITH YOU!!

Twilight: SHUT UP!!

LJ: So you are?

Hoodie: Hell yeah she is! She's blushing!

Twilight: LEAVE MEH ALONE!!! -grabs laptop and runs-

Hoodie: She wants-

Twilight: Don't you freaking say it...

Hoodie: She wants me!

Twilight: OMFG STAHP!!!

Jeff: Congrats Hoodie, she's blushing because of you.

Twilight: Wha?!

Hoodie: Yeah...I know...tough love babe?

Masky: WHAAAAAAAAAAT IS GOING ON HERE!!!!!!

Twilight: Ha...haha...nope...Bai -runs away and locks herself in her room-
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:iconashbear04:
ashbear04 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
I LITERALLY PEED LAUGHING! XD EPIC!
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:iconxdarkbunnyx:
xDarkBunnyx Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
OMG XD I DIDN'T THINK I WAS THAT FUNNY!!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   Writer
Funniest comment ever!
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:iconxdarkbunnyx:
xDarkBunnyx Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
Yay lol thanks I guess x3
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:iconcreepypastagirlhybri:
creepypastagirlhybri Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Student Artist
I remember when I first read striders story I screamed "CAN I RIDE IT!?!?!" XD 
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ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thats me to!!!! Im like : ....... Its fucking scary...... Its ADORBS!!! Can i have him as a pet?! I want to ride him!! Soooo cute!!!!
Some reason i find creepy/some scary things cute! Like somethings so creepy/scary its cute? Thats me a lot of the time
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014   Writer
XD
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:iconsilverpelt223:
Silverpelt223 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2013
I HAte CLIFFHANGERS!!!!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013   Writer
I love them
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:iconsilverpelt223:
Silverpelt223 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
.w.
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:iconsilverpelt223:
Silverpelt223 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2013
.w.
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:iconbonegirl3:
bonegirl3 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2013  Student General Artist
*trying 2 contain screams* yay! *has no idea y I said dat*
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013   Writer
^^
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:iconbonegirl3:
bonegirl3 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013  Student General Artist
:)
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:iconspyrocynder2002:
SpyroCynder2002 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013
🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊🙊
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013   Writer
^^
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:icontabookitty10:
Tabookitty10 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Strider is just a big fluffy kitty cat that very one should have at home to keep them company :3
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013   Writer
:3
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:icontabookitty10:
Tabookitty10 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I mean really lol why *facepalm* 
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013   Writer
:/
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:iconseerofheros:
seerofheros Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
My reaction to strider: it's so fluffy I'm gonna die!!!
My oc: WHAT IS THIS!?!?!?!?!?
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013   Writer
He is very fluffy
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:iconseerofheros:
seerofheros Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Kyra she has OCD with logic when aren't logical she flips
Kyra: WHAT IS THIS!
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:iconsummercsi:
SummerCSI Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
:iconiaintevenmadplz: 
Me: shrugs*
Slender: child, you're lying
Me: FINE I AM 
hoodie: what's going on????
Slender: summer is reading a fanfic about you..
Hoodie: *seductive tone* reallllyyy
Me: N-No!
Slender: child-
Me: NO
*jeff walks in* 
Jeff: ahahahahahah summer liiikes hooodie~ 
Hoodie: oh YEAH LOOK AT HER SHE'S BLUSHING! 
Me: *immediately turns expressionless* no...*walks away* 
Hoodie: ITS CALLED TOUGH LOVE BABE
Slender: :iconfacepalmplz: 
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:iconashbear04:
ashbear04 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
OMG! XD THAT IS EPICLY FUNNY!! (If dat makes sense) ....BANANA! XD
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:iconequalitygirl:
EqualityGirl Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't stop laughing! Crazy Laughing Diana Avatar 
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:iconseerofheros:
seerofheros Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Slender thoughts: I live with idiots.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013   Writer
LOL
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:iconsummercsi:
SummerCSI Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013
Ikr! I just thought it would be funny
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:iconsummercsi:
SummerCSI Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
:iconiaintevenmadplz:
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2013   Writer
Good....
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xXJetBlackOwlXx Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
Love the story, hate the cliffhanger but next parts out so nvrm!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013   Writer
I'm glad you love the story....and sorry but I love leaving cliffhangers. :icontrollfaceplz:
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:iconxxjetblackowlxx:
xXJetBlackOwlXx Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2013
I understand. It's so much fun making he reader wait!
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:iconbrunettefish:
BrunetteFish Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Professional Artist
at first... I thought Hoodie left me with the seedeater..... until I found out it was the strider...... I'm an idiot, I suck.XDDD
(reference!)
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013   Writer
No your not XD
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