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When I woke up my vision was blurry. And my head was killing me. Once my vision finally came back, sat up from where I was. It looked like I was in a cave. 'Where am I?' I thought to myself. 'What happened?' All I could remember was hearing Strider growling before I blacked out. "Hello?" I asked. I hear a sound, like someone was running. I suddenly see a shadowy figure run behind a rock on the other side of the cave. "Who's there?" I asked. "Can you please tell me where I am?" "I, uh..." said a voice. It sounded like a little girl's voice. "I, uh....I'm S-Sally." the voice said. "Y-Your names (Name), r-right?" she asked. "Yes." I reply. "How do you know my name?" "S-Seedeater told me. H-He asked me t-to watch you. U-Until he gets b-back."

Seedeater?! Of course! He must have kidnapped me! I've got to get out of here! "Sally." "Y-Yes?" "Come here please." The figure that ran behind the rock slowly came out. It was a little girl that looked to be 7 or 8 years old. She had brown hair that looked to be past her shoulders, green eyes, and she was wearing a dirty pink dress that was just above her knees, and she looked like she was bleeding from her head. "What happened to you?" I asked. "I don't want to talk about it." she said staring at the ground. "Why are you here?" "I told you, Seedeater wanted me to watch you until he came back." I walked over to the little girl and kneeled down to her level. "Did he do this to you?" She shook her head. "Do you know how to get out of here?" "Yes." she said pointing to the left. "The entrance to the cave is that way. But you can't leave. Not until Seedeater comes back." I looked at her confused. "Good, your awaked." Said a familiar voice.

I looked to the left and saw Seedeater, coming closer to me and Sally. "Good job Sally. You can leave now." he said. "Does that mean I win the game?" she asked. "Yes, you win." After a small cheer of joy, Sally left the cave. Once she was gone, Seedeater gave a small chuckle. "That girl will do anything you want, and all you have to do is tell her its a 'game'." I backed up until my back was against the cave wall. My heart started racing and all I could feel was fear. "No Strider. No Hoodie. And no where to run." He let out a small laugh. "Your all mine (Name)."

Hoodie's POV

Since Seedeater already told Slender about the lake, and he wasn't going to hurt (Name), I decided to show him where it was. When we got there, I got the shock of my life. Strider was lying on the ground feet away from the water, all tied up. Slender teleported over to him and I started calling out for (Name), but got no reply. I looked under willow tree, but she wasn't there. Now I was worried. Slender was getting the last of the ropes off of Strider. "Is she here?" he asked. "No. I think Seedeater took her." Once all the ropes were off of Strider, he sprang up to his feet. And I could tell he was not happy. "I think I know where Seedeater may have taken her." Slender said. Strider nodded his head. "Strider, go find Masky and meet us there. We might need the extra help." Strider took off in the other direction to go find my partner. 'Seedeater I swear to God, I AM GONNA MAKE YOU WISH YOU WERE NEVER BORN!!!!' I screamed in my head.

I the next thing I knew, we were somewhere else in the forest. "Hi Slendy. Hi Hoodie." said a cheerful voice. I saw Sally skipping happily towards us. "Hello Sally." Slender said. "What are doing here?" I asked. "I just beat Seedeater at a game. And all I had to do was watch some lady until he came back." she said cheerfully. "Where is he?" Slender asked. "In his cave." she replied, pointing towards the entrance. "Thanks Sally." I say running into the cave.

Once inside, I could her (Name) screaming. "Let me go! Let me go! Let me go!" I finally saw them. Seedeater was holding her from behind. He was pulling he shirt up, which made me know EXACTLY what was on his mind. "GET YOUR HANDS OFF HER YOU FUCKING SON OF A BITCH!!!" I yelled. He responded by pushing her to the side, slightly ripping her shirt. "I don't know how you found this place Hoodie." he said. "But I do know one thing. That your not getting out alive."

We started fighting, but our fight was soon interrupted by Slender grabbing Seedeater by the neck. Seedeater was lifted in the air and pinned against the cave wall. (Name) ran into my arms. I held her as tightly. Never wanting to let go until I knew she was safe. "Are you ok?" I asked. "I am now." she replied. "You guys ok?" We turned and Saw Masky. "Were fine." I said. "You three get out of here. I'll deal with Seedeater." Slender said. All three of us quickly left the cave. Strider was waiting for us out side. "The hells gotten into Seedeater?" Masky asked. "You tell me." I said. "I'll stay here in case Slender needs help." "Ok." Strider kneeled down and let me and (Name) climb on his back. Once we were on, he took off.

~A few minutes later~

Strider took us back to the lake. We got off his back and he ran off in the opposite direction. "Where's he going?" (Name) asked. "He must be going back to help them." The sun was nearly down. Me and (Name) went under the willow tree. We sat near the trunk of the tree, and I took off my mask. She laid her head on my shoulder. I thought of todays events. And what Seedeater was planning on doing to her. "(N-Name)?" "Yeah." she said lifting her head to look at. "I-I......I think its time I showed you how much I love you." I said pinning her to the ground and smashing my lips into hers.
Part 8 Yaayyyy :D Hope you like it.
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its lemon
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omg thank you! this is great btw!
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