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I woke up the next morning and grab my cellphone to check the time. It was 9:17 and my friend had text me seven times. I didn't bother to read them. I was still mad at her after last night. I walk out of my room and knock on my friend's door. There was no answer so I turn the knob and peek inside, only to discover that she wasn't there, which didn't surprise me. I walk down the hall and decide to make myself some breakfast. I was on a college campus in a small dorm house that me and (BF's name) shared. 

As I sat on the couch with a bowl of cereal I turn on the TV, only to find myself watching a news report.




Breaking News! The serial killer has struck again, claiming three more innocent lives! Three college freshman were found with their throats slit in Slender woods. The victims have been identified as 20 year-old Scott Madison, 19-year old Brad Jefferson, and 19 year-old (BF's Name). The police ask for full cooperation from citizens. Please if you saw anything strange last night, or have any detail that could lead to serial killer's where-about please contact police immediately!




I sat there staring at the screen. My thoughts echoing through my head. They're all dead......their throats were cut......serial killer slit their throats......just like I wished for........

Suddenly there was a knock at the door. I get up and answer it. There was a police man were at my door. "Can I help you?" I ask. "Yes. Are you (Full Name)?" He asked. "Yes." "I'm sorry to tell you but we found your friend (BF's Name) last night, she's dead." "I-I know. I saw it on the news just know." "Can you think of any one who would want to hurt her?" "N-No. No." "Ok. Thank you for your time. I'm sorry for your loss. If anything comes up we'll let you know." "Ok....thank you." 

I closed the door once he left. I was sad that she was dead. I know I said I wished the killer would come and slit her throat, but we all say things when we're mad right?

I walked into the kitchen and put the bowl in the sink. I turn around and stopped dead in my tracks. There, on the table, was a note. Folded, and with my name on it. I pick it up and unfold it, and my blood turned cold. 

On it, in what looked like blood was written.....I'd Kill For You.
I kinda want to take the story a little slowly....just a little
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:iconapollosmoon:
Apollosmoon Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Writer
If you would kill for me jeff, can you kill my step dad? He's the worst.
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drakethewolfve Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015  Student General Artist
awwwwwwwwwww how cute!~ that what i call love! XD
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CrystalARoseFazbear Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2015  Student General Artist
Its okay Reader-Chan/Reader-Kun ( if your a boy XD )....I know how you feel...I tell my friends to go do something stupid all the time...when I'm either upset or just being stupid XD
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20bluestart02 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2015
Thank you my friend for killing her. I don't really care about her anyways.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015   Writer
U evil
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20bluestart02 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015
I know I am
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Kittandragon Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
well jeff, thanks. in all honesty idc that you murdered her xD
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drakethewolfve Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2015  Student General Artist
well sh*t! his gift go nothing! XD
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:iconkittandragon:
Kittandragon Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
xD Yup.
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drakethewolfve Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2015  Student General Artist
XD
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:iconkittandragon:
Kittandragon Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
x3
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:icondrakethewolfve:
drakethewolfve Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2015  Student General Artist
^_^
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2015   Writer
IDC?
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:iconkittandragon:
Kittandragon Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
(idc= i dont care)
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015   Writer
(Thank You)
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:iconkittandragon:
Kittandragon Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
(yep~)
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Snow5555 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YAAAAAAY!!!!!!!Neko Emoji-37 (Yay) [V2] Jeff is awesome cuz he made my wish come true, my wish for everyone to die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYDoge troll emote  JK.Froggy Emoji-59 (Being kawaii) [V3] 
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014   Writer
Kawaii
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slendrgurl Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
Yay jeff makes wishes come true! Frog Emoji-58 (Yay) [V3] 
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014   Writer
yes
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
EHEHEHEHE..........You know what??....RUN!!!...Oh wait...you're at college....that's expensive......CONTROL YOUR ANGER...
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014   Writer
Control it child
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY!!!!!~
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SympathyfortheDevil9 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
O-O Jeff watcha up to...nvm I don't wanna know...
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014   Writer
Ok
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Lokisservant Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
DIS DESERVES A FAV! :iconthoranotherplz:
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014   Writer
Thanks ^^
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Spiritmist16 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
DAMN..
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014   Writer
You can say that again
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heartbreaker27 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Dang Awesome Story I can't wait for the third part >.<:)
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2014   Writer
:)
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BaniBab Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconsoonplz:????
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
Yes
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BaniBab Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconflailingplz:!!!
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WolfsRainKibaXBlai Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist
PLEASE PART THREE!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
Soon.
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:iconwolfsrainkibaxblai:
WolfsRainKibaXBlai Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist
Cool.
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GalaxygirlplaysMC Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow.. Cool story!-Me/Galaxy

Yeah!!-Abby
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
Thanks
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Maskyproxy1 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Good job friendYui Hirasawa (Castanets Dance) [V1] Spazattackplz 
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
Thank you ^^
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Elvira-Slender Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DAMN IT JEFF I DIDNT MEAN IT SERIOUSLY
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
LOL
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cinnabonbonn Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Llama Emoji-44 (Bleh) [V2] So cute. xD So excited for more~!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
^^
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:icon2olluxcaptoreridan:
2olluxcaptoreridan Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
Love it can't wait for more ^.^
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014   Writer
^^
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AlicexRiley Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014
I really hate too rush you but this story is amazing and OHMYGODILOVEIT! *Rambles on about how much I love the story*Icon - 012 Kyuto (Sparkle eyes) 
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014   Writer
Thank you.
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XxWolfRocksxX Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
If I found that later I would pass out right then and there XD
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