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April 4
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The months past....and the weather was singing with the sounds of summer. Which means only one thing for our college student (Name)........SUMMER VACATION!!!!!

(Name) only had on thing in mind to spend her vacation....spending in all with Jeff and Liu. Of course Jeff's friend Eyeless Jack dropped by every once in a while.....but would only end up getting chased away by Jeff and Liu because he kept trying to take (Name)'s organs. But other than that......every one was happy. Nothing could go wrong.

Or so they thought....

One night as Liu was out on a walk in the woods....

Liu's POV

The moon was bright, there was a light fog on the ground, owls and crickets sang to the night sky.....yup. Its the perfect night to just do nothing at all. I didn't feel like killing any way. I'd be at the house but seeing Jeff with (Name)....I started to think maybe I could get a girl. You know, settle down, have a kid or too. Just someone to spend my life with instead of killing all the time. 

I was pretty sure I was alone in the woods....until I heard "Where's Jeff?"

I turn around and see none other than the blacked eyed bitch. "The f**k do you want coal eyes?" I would have thrown my knife and killed her right than and there, but I wanted to save her for my brother. "Just wondering where your brother is." she said. "What makes you think I'll tell you?" "Because I know you want him dead as much as I do. C'mon Liu. He killed you're parents for Christ sake." "So what?" "So what? So what?! Is that what you think?!"
"No. But unlike you I know how to forgive people. Now go away." I turned around and started walking. "What about (Name)?" I hear her ask.

"....I have no idea what you're talking about."

"Uhhh yeah you do. (Name), Jeff's little girlfriend."

"What about her?"

"I know you like her Liu. I've seen the way you look at her. If you help me kill Jeff I'll make her yours."

" really are stupid. (Name)'s like a sister to me. You should see and eye doctor, cause you're clearly blind."

I started walking again and left her there. Stupid bitch. I thought as I walked back to the house.

I told Jeff about Jane and he seemed made about her trying to get me to kill him, and worried that she knows about (Name). I was worried too. (Name) really is like a sister to me so no one can say I don't care about her. But I know for sure I don't have any romantic feelings for her. Just brother to sister.

"Have you told her yet?" I asked.

"No." he replied.

"You know you have to tell her Jeff. If you don't she's gonna find out the hard, ugly way."

"I know....I'll tell her tonight."


~Time Skip to night time~

Your POV

I was in my room brushing my hair when Jeff came in, but he didn't seem happy. I know he has a smile carved in his face but that doesn't mean he can't frown.

"What's wrong Jeff?" I asked with obviously concerned. He sat on the bed and I sat next to him. I put my hand on his shoulder and repeat my question. "There's something......there's something I have to tell you." He said.

I turned my lap to face him better and he looked at me with sad, worried eyes.

"(Name).....I'm not good person. I kill people with thinking twice about who they are or what they do..."

"Jeff. That doesn't matter to me."

"I know, but.....what I'm trying to say is....when I kill people...I'm taking someone away from a family and....I'm going to make enemies."

"What do you mean?"

"There's someone out there who wants me dead. And they're not gonna stop until I am.......she's done everything she could to try and get me."


"Huh? Oh don't worry...I didn't have anything with her but.....she's pissed that I killed her parents."

"But you've killed a lot of people..."

"I know....but the thing is.....she knows about you....she knows about us."

"She.....I mean.....she might want me dead too?"

He nodded and than buried his head in his hands.

"I'm so sorry (Name)! I just wanted to keep you safe and know you're in the worst situation ever! What if she?.......What if I'm not?"

Before he could say anymore I grabbed his wrist and pulled them away from his face slowly. He looked at me and I smiled at him. I slowly leaned in and pressed my lips against his. He started kissing back right away. I let go of his wrist and wrap my arms around his neck. His arms went around my waist.

We soon pulled away and I looked at him and smiled. He was now much happier than he was before...but I could still see worry in his eyes. "It's ok Jeff. We're going to be ok. You, me, and Liu. Everything's going to be fine."

I hope...
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slendrgurl Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
is there a part 10 or is the next one the final?
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014   Writer
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"I hope." Wow. I WONDER WHAT'S GONNA HAPPEN. I love this, and I just like to save the best comments for last!!!!~
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014   Writer
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
alice387 Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014   Writer
Thank you :icondesueyeplz::icondesueye2plz:
alice387 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
Your welcome X3
SilverStarSparks Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Imma go kill Jane in her sleep! Who's with me?!
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Who wouldn't want to kill her?
She's a b****!!!!
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