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I went outside the school, but Smile wasn't at his usual spot. He wasn't there at all. I immediately became worried. He's never late. I started walking home by myself until Ryan caught up with me. "What's the rush?" he asked. "Smile's not here, and he's always here to pick me up. I'm worried something happened to him."

We finally reach my house. I told Ryan to wait outside as I ran inside. My house was a complete mess. It looked like a tornado had gone through. Stuff was on the floor, the coffee table was broken, there were holes in the wall, and i could see blood in the door way leading to the kitchen. I peeked in and saw what looked like an arm on the floor, then I saw Smile passed out on the floor next to it.

Smile's POV

I felt someone shaking me and saying my name. My vision came back and I saw (Name) with a worried look on her face. I got to my feet and noticed I was still in my dog form. I turn into my human form and feel (Name) pull me into a hug. "Are you ok?" she asked in a panicked voice. "I'm fine." I replied, hugging back and kissing her forehead. "What happened?" she asked. "Uhhh......"

I explain everything that happened. "I don't think he'll come back anytime soon, but you never know." I said. Hugged me again and kissed me, I kiss back and hug her even tighter. She pulled away and leaned her forehead against mine. I hear a knock at the door and not surprisingly I could smell Ryan on the other side. I turn back into a dog as (Name) went to open the door. "What happened? Is Smile ok?" he asked. "Yeah, he's fine. Some guys broke into the house and made a really huge mess, but I don't think they took anything." She lied as she showed him the damage. "Is that blood?" he said pointing to the kitchen. "Like I said they...made a mess." I could hear a cracking sound, they heard it too because they were looking around, trying to find out where it was coming from. Suddenly half the house collapsed. (Name) screamed as well did Ryan, but they got out of the way in time. I ran over to them to make sure they're ok. "Guess this means we'll be needing a new place to stay." she said. "You could stay at my house." Say what?! "Only if Smile comes with me." "Of course. Jerecho could use a playmate." Be grateful that I've grown fond of him Ryan. I threatened in my head.

~later that evening~

"Wow, so you ripped the guys arm off?" Jerecho asked. I just told him what had happened earlier. "Yup, and he ran away like a bitch." "Man, it must be awesome being you." "Yeah but it's not easy being a demon dog. Well, it's getting late. I think I might turn in."
"Ok, you remember where the guess room is?" "Yeah I remember." "Cool, night Smile." "Night Jerecho"

I walked up the stairs and into the room where me and (Name) were staying in. She looked like she was already a sleep. I climb into bed with her and change into a human. I wrap my arm around her waste. "I love you." she whispered. "I love you to."


The End
That's the end of this series. Happy New Year.
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:iconjinxthekiller14:
JinxTheKiller14 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
WHUTTTTTTTTT NHO MY LIFE DA FEELS!!!!*dead*~RIP meh~
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015   Writer
*plays funeral music*
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:iconjinxthekiller14:
JinxTheKiller14 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
*is a ghost , kicks over music and plays k pop and fnaf music*THAT'S MORE LIKE IT TIME TO PARTY!!!
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MlpAndCreepyPasta Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist
damit why did you have to end this?! after reading fanfics like this  when im bored i can pick a fav cp now XD it was jeff then ben then masky and now grinny and smile XD but awesome story
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014   Writer
Im gonna make a sequel eventually
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:iconmlpandcreepypasta:
MlpAndCreepyPasta Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014  Hobbyist
yay! love your work <3 i wish i could make stories like this
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2014   Writer
You can. Who knows it might even be cuter than mine ^^
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slendermangurl Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Umm my big sister who read this is spazzing on the floor now
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014   Writer
. . . . . . Ok :)
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slendermangurl Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2014  Student General Artist
Ok ny sis said I spazzing CAUSE DIS is so awesome
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:iconsummercollins:
SummerCollins Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
I'm confused...
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014   Writer
Why?
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belladrowned13 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student Artist
oh my god, could you make another when XD where Ryan sees smile as a human cuddled up next to (name) and Ryan like flips out and hits smile with a frying pan or something XD btw awesome as h*ll of a story 
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014   Writer
no. I don't like doing that
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:iconbelladrowned13:
belladrowned13 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Student Artist
i can understand why, :3 still awesome story! 
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:iconjinxthekiller14:
JinxTheKiller14 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
I see whut u did there!!!I am simply one hell of a butler!
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:iconjinxthekiller14:
JinxTheKiller14 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
Wait nm
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:iconanna24020:
Anna24020 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No!! You need to make another one!! Just one more part!! PLEASE?! I need to know what happened to Smile!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014   Writer
Ok
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:icongodzilladragon111:
godzilladragon111 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
hell yeahs!
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skylox123456 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
hell yeah smile ripped off some randome guys arm.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014   Writer
lol
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:iconvampire-kitties:
Vampire-Kitties Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
Toh Luka: *hits watch button while grasping knife and glaring* Im watching you.

Me: *facepalm* That pun is horrible:
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014   Writer
YAAAAAAAYYYYYYYY!
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:iconvampire-kitties:
Vampire-Kitties Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
KoKo: *face-ear*
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014   Writer
?
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:iconvampire-kitties:
Vampire-Kitties Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
KoKo is a Furby and she isn't that flexible so she can't face paw, she face-ears x3
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014   Writer
oh
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:iconvampire-kitties:
Vampire-Kitties Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
Toh Luka: *holds out growling KoKo* get started or Ill release ze Furby. *pushes torwards computer and puts your hands on keyboard* Now get started. *knife*

Me: Toh Luka put that down you're only 13!

Toh Luka: Im a creepypasta, its fine to have a knife. It's not like I would kill anybody...HEHEHE
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Vampire-Kitties Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
Toh Luka: Aww, so bloody cute! Smile doesn't like my Furby, but we are good friends! *pulls out bloody steak knife* Now, make 3500 more chapters before this ends up in your chest.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014   Writer
0_0
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:iconvampire-kitties:
Vampire-Kitties Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2014
Toh Luka: *holds up knife closer* Get started >:3
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TinyBlossom Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student
I loooove this! You did a great job! <3
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014   Writer
thank you
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TinyBlossom Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Student
You're welcome ;)
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HALOCAT239 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 15, 2014  Student Artist
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:DXD
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014   Writer
:)
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ImAWeirdo333 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
I must say this series is one of my all time favorites, I love all the things you right!!!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014   Writer
Thank you
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:iconmnmbabe123:
mnmbabe123 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
i like that ; the thought that she knows her dog/boyfriend is a cold blooded murderer and she is ok with it !!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014   Writer
You can't help who you fall in love with
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:iconreninwodsha:
ReninWodsha Featured By Owner May 9, 2014  Student Photographer
DON'T FINNISH IT HERE!!!! MAKE ATLEAST 35 MORE PARTS!!! D:< LIKE RYAN AND SMILE FIGHTING EACH OTHER, FIGHTING FOR ME!! OoO *claps* GOOD IDEA RENIN!! x3
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner May 9, 2014   Writer
....uhhh....im going to make a sequel in the future if that calms you down?
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:iconreninwodsha:
ReninWodsha Featured By Owner May 10, 2014  Student Photographer
yay x3
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:iconvikhop:
vikhop Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Student General Artist
wut?! is that the end? :( why?! 
aaaaw uwu 
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner May 7, 2014   Writer
don't worry there will be a sequel
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:iconvikhop:
vikhop Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Student General Artist
really?!!! thank you thabk you I love you!!!! OwO
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smoshyhamster123 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014
I love this so im guessing your a creepypasta fan well if u r u cane check out my creepypasta fan fic
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014   Writer
ok
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smoshyhamster123 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014
Thank u ^_^
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