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The next day Ryan wanted to walk me home again, and Smile walked with us. I was wondering why he was being so nice to me. He's never talked to me before, and he has a girlfriend. On the way I decided to ask him.

"Hey Ryan?"
"Yeah?"
"Why are you being so nice to me?"
"I don't have any reason to be mean to you."
"I mean why are being nice now. You've never talked to me before."
"....Uhh, well you seemed lonely so I thought you needed someone to talk to."
Why do I feel like he's not telling me something? I guess I should let it go. "Ok. So how's your girlfriend?"
"Scarlet? S-She's fine." The tone in his voice told me otherwise.                                                      
"What's wrong?"
"Well, things aren't going well between us. She's getting way too controlling. She calls me like every five minutes, asking where I am, who I'm with, what I'm doing. Its getting too much. I have turn off my cell phone just because of it. I think I'm gonna have to break up with her. To be honest, I don't think I feel the same way for her anymore."
"If she's that controlling, she is not gonna let you walk away easy."
"Yeah I know."

   We stopped in front of my house to say goodbye. "Thanks for walking me and Smile home again." "No problem." He turned around to leave I turned to walk to the door. "Hey (Name)." He called out. I turned to face him. "Yeah?" "Are you doing anything Friday?" "No, why?" "Well, I was wondering if maybe...we could go to the park or something. You can bring Smile and I could bring my dog." There was a moment of silence before I gave him an answer. "Sure." "R-Really?" "Yeah. After school. I'll meet you there at 4." "Great, sounds like a da-Plan! Sounds like a plan....Bye." I waved goodbye and went inside the house.

    I let my backpack fall to the floor as I sit on the couch. I looked over at Smile who had turned into his human form quickly. He leaned against the wall and gave me a 'are you serious' face. 

"What?" I ask.
"You know what?"
"No I don't."
"You really don't?"
"What?"
"C'mon (Name) even a deaf person can tell what he's thinking."
"Alright, fine. What's he thinking?"
"When he said 'plan' he really meant 'date'."
I blushed a little. "Y-Your crazy. No he didn't."
"Yes he did. I heard him stutter out there. He wants to go on a date with you."
"If it's a date then why did he insist on letting you come?"
"So you wouldn't think it was a date, and to him I'm just a dog and not your boyfriend."
"But you are my boyfriend."
"He doesn't know that."
"Relax Smile. I'll just explain to him that I don't feel the same way and if he tries anything you'll be there to stop him. Ok?"
"Ok."

 

~Time Skip to Friday~

Smile's POV

    I can't believe this is really happening. I'm agreeing to hang out with someone who's after my girl! (Name) sat on a park bench as I sat on the ground next to her. Soon I start to get a familiar sent. Well, no backing out. Might as well role with it. "Hey (Name)." I hear. "Hey Ryan. Is this your dog?" she replied. I look over and see Ryan with a brown Pit Bull. "Yeah, this is Jerecho. He's two years old." We started walking. "He's a big one." "I know. When we got him he was no bigger than my heel. Once he grew a lot of my neighbors got scared of him because he's a pit. Man I hate that!" "Hate what?" "The fact that people think Pit Bulls are born killers, and there not! There the sweetest dogs in the world! My cousin has one and she uses him to watch her 2 year old girl when ever she can't be in the same room." "The dog hasn't bitten her?" "No, my cousin trained him to be a nanny dog. If you train pit bulls correctly, they become the greatest family dog you can find. But noooo. No people want to believe all the stereotypes about pits. Saying all they do is kill, kill, kill!" I bet that sucks.

~We will now enter a conversation between Smile and Jerecho~

Hey.
Huh?
I'm Jerecho.
Smile.
Are you the one who killed the people on my block?
Most likely. Why?
I can smell blood on you. Are you the one they call Smile Dog?
Yes.
What's it like being a demon dog?
Its fun.
Can you turn into a human?
Yeah.
Whoa. I wish I could turn into a human. I would finally have thumbs and wouldn't have the urges to chase cats and cars, or drink out of the toilet, or chew things I'm not suppose to chew, or fall for the human's baby talk.
Ok. So what's it like being a pit bull?"
Its pretty cool. Because I look so mean people don't bother me or my owner. But it hurts when people thing your a born monster. Especially other dogs.
I wouldn't know what that feels like since I am a monster.
How many people have you killed?
I dunno. I don't keep track of that stuff.
Alright.
What about Ryan. Why's he being so nice to (Name) all of a sudden?
He has a big, no, HUGE crush on her. Ever since him and his girlfriend started going bad, (Name) is all he ever thinks about now. 
I knew it.
Knew it? You don't know the half of it! He's always telling me about how gorgeous she is and how she's everything Scarlet never was and that she's everything he's ever wanted in a girl and yada yada yada.
Wait you mean.... he's in love with her?
I'd be surprise if he wasn't dude.

 

~Time Skip back to the house~

"I had fun." (Name) said. "Me too." Ryan said. "I guess I'll see you Monday." "Yeah, maybe we could have lunch together." "Well, goodnight Ryan. Night Jerecho." "Bye (Name), bye Smile."

 

    We went inside and (Name) changed into her pajamas, while I change into my human form. "You didn't tell him you don't feel the same way." I said. She just giggled and kissed my cheek. "Lets lay in the bed."  We did and she laid her head on my chest while we watched a scary movie on TV. "Smile?" "Yeah?" we both sat up a little and looked at each other. I suddenly felt her lips pressed against mine. I was surprised at first, but I kissed back. After a few minutes we pulled away. "I love you." she said. At that moment this warm feeling just took over me. "I love you too."


 

Sorry for the long wait and true fact; when properly trained pit bulls become great family dogs, so stop saying they're killers!
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RaverDragon Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2015  Student General Artist
I'm ok with pit bull's but I do find it frustrating when people say they are just bad dogs.
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oriam421 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2015
I think pit bulls are adorable.
also I totally agree, I know this one pit bull and she was sooooo lovable and motherly!
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shywerido Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist
Gossiping dogs! :D
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legoninjagogirl Featured By Owner Edited Mar 20, 2015  Student General Artist
that is true about pit bulls they are nice if you train them my friends have one and whenever i go to their house she attacks me with dog kisses XD but sadly they moved luckily we text each other every now and then
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2015   Writer
At least you keep in contact
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MD9360 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015  Student General Artist
That's true about oit bulls. I own TWO and the bigger one, the one who looks the 'scariest', barely barks(and when he does we call him 'girly' cause it's so cute <3) and he's one of the sweetest little things we've ever had.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015   Writer
:iconpitbullplz:
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MD9360 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2015  Student General Artist
XD *huggles the pit bull pic* Doggy!
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Kitteh19 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
U can never stay Mad at me smile Huggle! Meow :3 Wink/Razz Huggle! 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014   Writer
:meow:
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Jessleia Featured By Owner Edited Nov 5, 2014  Student Artist
I have a pit bull and i hate it when they say keep her away from me she's is a killer thats when I get pissed off back to the story ok me and smile are a cute couple Zalgo cant kill me because I am a dragon so yea no matter what I am going no were
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014   Writer
Ok :)
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rayrayrawrsyou Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014  Student
omfg I hate when people say "oh pit bulls are sooooooooo dangerous" when in reality we the people are far more dangerous than any other animal on earth! but since I has meh handsome puppy named Gabe ( he is the sweetest pit bull EVER) I wont kill anyone unless they hurt him ^.^
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014   Writer
Cute. My pit howls at everyone he sees just so they cam rub his belly
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rayrayrawrsyou Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014  Student
awe my dog doesn't howl he only barks but that's only to get peoples attention
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skylox123456 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014
aww! my uncle has a pit and she is sooooo cute. her name is angle baby.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2014   Writer
Awwww
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ViolentNight Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I wish I had a pit bull but my parents think that they will attack people. It's really getting on my nerves. Like seriously they are adorable and loveable if they are Treated kindly. It's cause people usually miss treat them that they act up.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014   Writer
yes
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lonewolf200212 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Student Digital Artist
thank GOD!!! 'Pits are deadly' 'they'll kill you', I have a pit bull & he is a big goof will love till you die!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014   Writer
yup
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Tigerwolflover Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
I want a pitbull SO BAD
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014   Writer
I have one.......I call him my big head
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bloodmoonFANGZ13 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014
i had a pit name dook and one name wicked
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2014   Writer
Cute names
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bloodmoonFANGZ13 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!
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AnimeLover5656 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG xD xD i wuvs yew smile
omg da feelz doe
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014   Writer
lol
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Klearlyme Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My dad's freinds sister has a pit and she was the sweetest thing ever and she had blue gray fur she was so pretty, then she had puppies and they were so cute and one was blue-gray too! My dad doesn't stereotype pits and was gonna get me one of the pups but since my mum stereotypes them she got mad and I didn't get to get one I was so mad. 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014   Writer
It's two against one. 
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aidlevice Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
Amen I had a pit named Mickey because he had a mouse shape on his back
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   Writer
Cute :3
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aidlevice Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Student Artisan Crafter
I know stupid neighbors blamed him for their wreck of a garden but it was their dog nobody listens to me though:(
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bubbleonfire Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You piss off any animal or person and they're gonna want to fight back. My aunt had a pit bull that watched me and my older cousin in the park when she would have to go on the phone or something.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014   Writer
:D
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bubbleonfire Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*nods*
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russialover2013 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Awwwwwwwwww~
Pitbulls arent killers
._. Oh no....
We had a pitbull....
It got out...
And she went up to a lady and didnt hurt her.
She called animal control and they went to the pound the lady said she hurt her and her dog LIES she didnt touch them!
Then she got put down ;-;
I miss Carmella....

I love this story :)
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014   Writer
:(
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russialover2013 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Hm? Whats wrong?
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014   Writer
Nothin
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russialover2013 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Oh okayzzzzzz
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slysonicfan Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist

Pitbulls aren't born killers, they may have been born with fighting instinct, but that isn't there fault. We trained them to be like that, so, the real monsters are humas.




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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014   Writer
Agreed
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OkatuFandmChick Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Another fact about pit bulls:: You piss them off or hurt them they will stack no matter how well trained they are. I stil love em tho^^
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014   Writer
Or if you hurt someone they love
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OkatuFandmChick Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yep. I actually know a pit bull that's name is Charger. he is very protective of my dads GF so each time you go in her room while shes not there he will chase you out and pin you to the wall. thats how he got his name.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014   Writer
Wow.
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OkatuFandmChick Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
yeah.....he hasn't done it to me yet. and whats funny is he'll let you sleep on 'em~ ^^
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Wolfielove16 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
When i was little i owned a pit named chopper and the people next door had a dog that attacked me one day and my dog saved my life and killed the dog but i had to get stitches and i loved him till a drunk guy went out of his way to hit my best friend.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014   Writer
That sucks. At least he saved you from the other dog
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