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Warning: some strong language. You have been warned.

~The next day~

Smile's POV

    (Name) had to go to work so I was left at the house all by myself. I think it's time me and Ryan had a little talk. I wasn't going to hurt him or anything, I just wanna find out why he's really after (Name). Either he really does have a crush on her, or he's just using her to get his girlfriend jealous. Okay, so I really didn't buy the whole controlling girlfriend story. I opened the door and walked outside, making sure to close the door behind me. I walked into a near by alley way and made sure no one could see me. I then turn into my normal dog form and start walking towards Ryan's house. Using his sent to guide me.

    Surprisingly his place was only four blocks away from (Name)'s. I didn't see him in his front yard, so I try to sneak around to the back. I push the gate to the back yard open and sneak in. I could smell that Ryan wasn't there either. I guess I'm gonna have to wait. 'Smile?' I hear a familiar voice say. I look over and see Jerecho walking over to me. 'What are you doing here?' he asked. '(Name) went to work and I got bored.' I lied. 'So you came here?' 'Yeah, I figured talking to you might help kill my boredom.' 
'How did you get out of your house?'
'I can turn into a human remember?'
'This wouldn't happen to have anything to do with Ryan having a crush on (Name) would it?'
'No. Why would I worry about that?'
'Because Ryan just got home and I can smell his girlfr- well ex-girlfriend. Wanna go spy on them?'
'Sure.'

    We creep over to the front of the house, making sure Ryan and, what's her name again? Scarlet? What ever, we just made sure they couldn't see us. Not that it would matter. I could tell that both of them were not happy.

"So who is she?!" The dark haired girl demanded.
"What are you talking about?" Ryan asked.

'Looks like he doesn't want to tell her about (Name).' Jerecho said.

"Who the fuck is (Name)?!"
"None of your business!"
"Uhh, excuse me?! It is my business!"
"Not anymore!"
"What?!"
"You heard me Scarlet! My personal life is none of you business! We're done! You're nothing but a fucking control freak who throws a tantrum just because you can't have your way! We! Are! Finished!" Ryan turned around to go inside his house.
"One day!" She said. 
"What?" Ryan asked, turning around to face her.
"Just one day Ryan and you'll be begging me to take you back!"
"I don't see how I'll be begging you to take me back when I'm the one who dumped you. Dumbass!" And with that, Ryan went inside and Scarlet stormed off into her car.

'I guess she really was controlling.' I said.
'Hell yeah she was. She called him like every three minutes. And if he wouldn't answer his cell phone she'd call the house phone and give his parents a hard time.'
   
We start walking back to the back yard.

'Hey Jerecho?'
'Yeah?'
'How'd she act towards you?'
'When Ryan was around she'd say I was cute, but if me and her were left in the same room alone she hated me. And not just because I'm a pit. She hates any dog that's not a lap dog. I can't tell you how many times she tried to stab me with her stilettos. One time she hurt her self and tried to blame it on me. But Ryan knows me and trained me better.'
'What a bitch.'
'You can say that again. I can't imagine what she'll do to (Name).'
'What do you mean?'
'In most relation ships where on of the spouses is controlling, they either end up killing or hurting their ex-lover, or their ex's new lover.'
'Really?'
'Yup.'
'How do you know that?'
'Ryan watches a lot of homicide shows. Not the fictional ones like 'Criminal Minds' but ones that actually happened like 'Dateline' or '48 Hours'. You know what I mean?'
'Yeah, I know what you mean. Well, it was nice talking to you.'
'You too, we should do this again sometime. None of the other dogs like talking to me.'
'Why?'
'I'm a pit bull remember?'
'Oh yeah. Well, see ya Jerecho.'
'Bye Smile. Have fun killing random people.'

 

~Time Skip~

Your POV

    I came home from work and found Smile watching TV in the living room. I sat next to him and laid my head on his shoulder. "Busy day?" he asked. "Yup." I replied. A few minutes later the doorbell rang. I get up to answer it. It was Ryan. "Hey Ryan." I greeted. "Hi." he replied. "(Name), I was wondering if maybe you and I could...go by the pier?" "Sounds like fun but I'm pretty tired after work and....Ryan, you're a really nice guy and I like you, but I only like you as a friend." "Oh." I could tell he was hurt by this, but rejection isn't easy to swallow. "I'm sorry." "No, it's ok. I understand if you don't feel the same way, but can we at least still be friends?" "Of course we can friends." "Well, friendship is better then nothing. Thanks (Name). See you later." "Bye." I close the door and sit back next to Smile. "Still jealous?" I asked playfully. "Maybe a little." He said. I laughed.

 

  

 

Is it still cute or am i starting to suck? Be honset.
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:iconhipsterkarkat:
hipsterkarkat Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2015  New member
you should write a smile x jerecho story cuz i ship it
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Mangleartist1 Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2015  New member Hobbyist General Artist
jerecho is male like smile. I have nothing against it but Smile's not Gay.
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JinxTheKiller14 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
It doin great it's still super kawaii
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015   Writer
Thank you
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JinxTheKiller14 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2015
XD
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Hetagirl63 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015
Thank you so much for adding Criminal Minds to a conversation. Or just in a fan-fic really. Love the show so much (*day dreams of Dr Spencer Reid*)
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015   Writer
LOL NP
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Jeffythekiller123 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014   Traditional Artist
I love how Jerecho is all like,
'U smile dog?'
'Yup'
'U kill people?'
'Yus'
'Cool'
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shywerido Featured By Owner May 17, 2015  Hobbyist
Ikr! So kawaii!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014   Writer
Yes. My big headed baby is chill like that
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HALOCAT239 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Artist
STILL CUTE'!!! :D
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014   Writer
:3
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corpsegirl01 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
You gonna continue? Its awrsome btw
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014   Writer
Thank you
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blackspiritwolf12 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
but i like criminal minds i'm watching it right now  but  this story is still KAWAIDESUClapping Pony Icon - Complete Mane Six Clap Kawaii Mouse (Being Kawaii) [V1] Racing Girl Emoji (Ehehe) [V4] Natsu and Happy (Thumbs Up) [V1] Red Hearts PUKE Clapping Pony Icon - Trixter Confused Fox Icon Tropical Love :la: :puppycat: Drawponies-commission titiels?// titiels?// titiels?// titiels?// titiels?// titiels?// titiels?// titiels?// titiels?// titiels?// titiels?// titiels?// titiels?// DarkDapple's Smile DarkDapple's Smile DarkDapple's Smile DarkDapple's Smile DarkDapple's Smile DarkDapple's Smile Bulbasaur Sprite. Generation VI #135 Jolteon  sry about the wovles ii just love wolves
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014   Writer
lol
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blackspiritwolf12 Featured By Owner Jun 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
ikr Running Wolf GIMPed Link transforms to Wolf Link Fox+Wolf Glomp Double Paws Wolf :la: Fursuit Wolf Cuddle Stroke Wolf by the Ears Wolf Attack Loop Black Wolf - Free Emoticon Wolf Eheh Request - Wolf Lalala Al Jump Rope Icon <-- its al LOL CCCOOOOOOOLLLLLLLOOOORRRSSSS! :wolftard: Wolf Mad Wolfemote :wolfnoid: Jump Roping Ed <-- its edward lol run run wolf Okami Heartagram Icon Lick Wolf Crying Yellow Wolf v2 Wolf Uhh Wolfwood La Wolfwood? Werewolf Emoticon Wolf Wagging Tail Emote kuroshin on icon :wolfyawn: Kitty Emote Wolf heart plz Wolfwood Hug: Sini Winter Wolf Icon Werewolf Emote Self Preservation Avatar Shuck icon animation black and white wolf :Wolfwood Eager: Levitation Wooded Wolf Smiley wolf animation Hence the Name.. :wolfling: White Wolf La :wolfling: Wolfwood V Ninja Avatar Charactercon Profile: Wolfwood Wolf Emote PSP Playing Emote Paws245 Icon Special Hypnotic Dance Avatar :Rainbow on a Rainbow: icon RQ Wolfwood Thrust Wolf cry avi Amaterasu Okami Epic Shake Wolfwood wolf run gif SOOOOOOO MANY WOVELS WOOP WOOP
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kotadog88 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
XD
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animefanbookworm Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student General Artist
IIIIITTTTTTSSSSSS SSSSSOOOOOOOO CCCCUUUUUTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!! *(starts hugging random people because of cute overload)*
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014   Writer
:hug:
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animefanbookworm Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student General Artist
Spread the looooooooovvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014   Writer
#spreadthelove
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animefanbookworm Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Student General Artist
YES.
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Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
I freken (<--- can't spell) love Jerecho! What other dog is like "Have fun klling random people" and not have the living crap scared out of him, when next to or talking to Smile. He is freken awsome, optamisum (<---- can't spell) ROCKS!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   Writer
^^
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:iconmermaidgirl548:
Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
Can you do a Grinny (alredy 4got how 2 spell smilling cat's name XP) or a Ticky-Toby X Reader?
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014   Writer
Definitely gonna do Toby......Grinny is still a maybe for me.
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Mermaidgirl548 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
YAY, TOBY! Tackling hug Tackling hug Tackling hug Tackling hug Tackling hug Tackling hug Tackling hug Tackling hug Tackling hug Tackling hug Tackling hug Tackling hug  
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ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hay!!! Criminal minds is amazing!!! I love Spencer Reid!!!
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014   Writer
I like it too, but i prefer fact over fiction
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ayanna-vvision Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well i cant complain because you like something i dont because i dot care! I hate when people talk shit about something they dont like! You dont see me talking shit about fact stuff! :D
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014   Writer
:hug:
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Potatopie5112 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Student General Artist
I like the dogs convos because they're just like humans "hey sup man" "oh nothin much, chased a squirrel, you know, the usual."
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014   Writer
LOL
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Wolfielove16 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014
I Pray Scarlet doesnt kill us guys.... altho if im attacked i tend to make sure they cant hurt me and are very scared of me.
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014   Writer
Yes
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Kokoapurr Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"Have fun killing random people."
That was awesome. XD
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013   Writer
X3
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zelda806 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
question how do smile jerecho talk by barkin or is it somehow telepathic
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013   Writer
A little bit of both.
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zelda806 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2013
thx
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SpyroCynder2002 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
It's still cute!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013   Writer
Thank you
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SpyroCynder2002 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
You're welcome!
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DoggLOVER456 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013
It's still cute!~ I love the pit bull, especially when him and Smile have conversations xDD 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013   Writer
^^
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Alice-Fujioka Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Student Artist
CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013   Writer
^W^
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Starla-Shooter Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2013
Haha, I love the conversations between smile and the pit bull. I don't know why, I just get a kick out of it! Happy Emote Green (Animated) 
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