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Warning: some strong language. You have been warned.

~The next day~

Smile's POV

    (Name) had to go to work so I was left at the house all by myself. I think it's time me and Ryan had a little talk. I wasn't going to hurt him or anything, I just wanna find out why he's really after (Name). Either he really does have a crush on her, or he's just using her to get his girlfriend jealous. Okay, so I really didn't buy the whole controlling girlfriend story. I opened the door and walked outside, making sure to close the door behind me. I walked into a near by alley way and made sure no one could see me. I then turn into my normal dog form and start walking towards Ryan's house. Using his sent to guide me.

    Surprisingly his place was only four blocks away from (Name)'s. I didn't see him in his front yard, so I try to sneak around to the back. I push the gate to the back yard open and sneak in. I could smell that Ryan wasn't there either. I guess I'm gonna have to wait. 'Smile?' I hear a familiar voice say. I look over and see Jerecho walking over to me. 'What are you doing here?' he asked. '(Name) went to work and I got bored.' I lied. 'So you came here?' 'Yeah, I figured talking to you might help kill my boredom.' 
'How did you get out of your house?'
'I can turn into a human remember?'
'This wouldn't happen to have anything to do with Ryan having a crush on (Name) would it?'
'No. Why would I worry about that?'
'Because Ryan just got home and I can smell his girlfr- well ex-girlfriend. Wanna go spy on them?'
'Sure.'

    We creep over to the front of the house, making sure Ryan and, what's her name again? Scarlet? What ever, we just made sure they couldn't see us. Not that it would matter. I could tell that both of them were not happy.

"So who is she?!" The dark haired girl demanded.
"What are you talking about?" Ryan asked.

'Looks like he doesn't want to tell her about (Name).' Jerecho said.

"Who the fuck is (Name)?!"
"None of your business!"
"Uhh, excuse me?! It is my business!"
"Not anymore!"
"What?!"
"You heard me Scarlet! My personal life is none of you business! We're done! You're nothing but a fucking control freak who throws a tantrum just because you can't have your way! We! Are! Finished!" Ryan turned around to go inside his house.
"One day!" She said. 
"What?" Ryan asked, turning around to face her.
"Just one day Ryan and you'll be begging me to take you back!"
"I don't see how I'll be begging you to take me back when I'm the one who dumped you. Dumbass!" And with that, Ryan went inside and Scarlet stormed off into her car.

'I guess she really was controlling.' I said.
'Hell yeah she was. She called him like every three minutes. And if he wouldn't answer his cell phone she'd call the house phone and give his parents a hard time.'
   
We start walking back to the back yard.

'Hey Jerecho?'
'Yeah?'
'How'd she act towards you?'
'When Ryan was around she'd say I was cute, but if me and her were left in the same room alone she hated me. And not just because I'm a pit. She hates any dog that's not a lap dog. I can't tell you how many times she tried to stab me with her stilettos. One time she hurt her self and tried to blame it on me. But Ryan knows me and trained me better.'
'What a bitch.'
'You can say that again. I can't imagine what she'll do to (Name).'
'What do you mean?'
'In most relation ships where on of the spouses is controlling, they either end up killing or hurting their ex-lover, or their ex's new lover.'
'Really?'
'Yup.'
'How do you know that?'
'Ryan watches a lot of homicide shows. Not the fictional ones like 'Criminal Minds' but ones that actually happened like 'Dateline' or '48 Hours'. You know what I mean?'
'Yeah, I know what you mean. Well, it was nice talking to you.'
'You too, we should do this again sometime. None of the other dogs like talking to me.'
'Why?'
'I'm a pit bull remember?'
'Oh yeah. Well, see ya Jerecho.'
'Bye Smile. Have fun killing random people.'

 

~Time Skip~

Your POV

    I came home from work and found Smile watching TV in the living room. I sat next to him and laid my head on his shoulder. "Busy day?" he asked. "Yup." I replied. A few minutes later the doorbell rang. I get up to answer it. It was Ryan. "Hey Ryan." I greeted. "Hi." he replied. "(Name), I was wondering if maybe you and I could...go by the pier?" "Sounds like fun but I'm pretty tired after work and....Ryan, you're a really nice guy and I like you, but I only like you as a friend." "Oh." I could tell he was hurt by this, but rejection isn't easy to swallow. "I'm sorry." "No, it's ok. I understand if you don't feel the same way, but can we at least still be friends?" "Of course we can friends." "Well, friendship is better then nothing. Thanks (Name). See you later." "Bye." I close the door and sit back next to Smile. "Still jealous?" I asked playfully. "Maybe a little." He said. I laughed.

 

  

 

Is it still cute or am i starting to suck? Be honset.
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Jeffythekiller123 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014
I love how Jerecho is all like,
'U smile dog?'
'Yup'
'U kill people?'
'Yus'
'Cool'
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014   Writer
Yes. My big headed baby is chill like that
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HALOCAT239 Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Student Artist
STILL CUTE'!!! :D
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014   Writer
:3
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corpsegirl01 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
You gonna continue? Its awrsome btw
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014   Writer
Thank you
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lol
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