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~Time skip to next Friday~

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After I told Ryan that I didn't feel the same way he seemed sad at first, but after a few days he started to cheer up. He didn't let it effect our friendship, which was good because I was happy being friends with him. He's a really nice guy. Some of the kids at school thought were dating, but I told them we were just friends. Ryan was still one of the popular boys and a lot of the other girls were jealous because he would walk me home everyday. I just ignored them. Other than that everything was normal. Except for one thing......Scarlet hadn't been at school all week. I wasn't really concerned, I guess she's just dealing with the breakup.

 

The bell finally rang signaling that school was over. To make things better, it was only a week before summer vacation. I walked outside and Smile was the first one to greet me. We sat at our usual spot was used to wait for Ryan. Smile still didn't like him as much, but he got use to him walking me home everyday. I suddenly felt a sharp pain on the right side of face, and I fell to the floor. It felt like someone punched me. I look up and see Scarlet standing over me with an angry look on her face. "You bitch! You stole my boyfriend from me!" she yelled. Smile growled and barked at her viciously. "Shut up you stupid mutt!" she yelled as she tried to kick him. Smile responded by biting her ankle. She screamed and he let go. He bit her hard enough to draw blood, but I knew he could have done much worse. I got back to my feet and put my hand on my cheek. It stung really bad, no doubt that hit will be leaving a bruise. "(Name)!" I hear Ryan call. He ran over to me and Smile, who was still barking at Scarlet. "Are you ok?" he asked. "Yeah...I'll be fine." I responded. "C'mon, lets get out of here." he said. "Ok, lets go Smile."

Smile gave Scarlet one last growl before turning around to follow me and Ryan. "You'll pay for this you little bitch! You and your fucking dog!" she yelled. I just ignored her and kept walking.

"Are you sure you're ok?" Ryan asked, as we turned the corner to my block. "I'm fine Ryan. Really." He still had a concerned look on his face. We stopped in front of my house and said our goodbyes.

 

~Time Skip~

 

It was 11:37 and night and I could barley keep my eyes open. I felt Smile kiss my cheek as I fall into a deep slumber.

 

Smile's POV


"Don't worry (Name) I'll be back soon." I whisper. I leave her room, and walk out of the house. I change into my dog form and follow the bitch's sent. After a few minutes I finally find her house.  I walk around the house and spot an open window. I jump in and walk throughout the house, up the stairs, and into her room were she was sound asleep. I open my mouth wide and bite down on her neck. I tug on her throat as hard as I could. The sound of ripping flesh echoed through the room and blood spattered on the wall and soaked in her bed. She might already be dead, put I wasn't finished. I haven't killed in a while, and she hurt (Name). So I'm gonna make this bitch pay! I claw at her body and rip her stomach open. I tare up her arms, legs, and the rest of her body.

By the time I'm done she's hardly recognizable. Blood and small pieces of flesh are splattered all over the wall, and on my fur. I shake some of it off and walk out of her room, down the stairs, and out the way I came. I went to a neighbor's pool and use the water to wash off the blood. The once clear water was now red from the blood that use to be on me. I leave and head back to (Name)'s.

Once there I turned back in a human. I then crawl into bed with her, as if I never left.

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flamePrincelover Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2015
"I'll get you you bitch you and your dog to" who a thought wizard of oz there ??
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2015   Writer
LMAO
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Jessleia Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2014  Student Artist
Now i need a smile dog plushy :3
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2014   Writer
:meow:
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Nightfang621 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He would be da best dog eva!!!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014   Writer
Yup
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Tigerwolflover Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014
sneaky smile is sneaky
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014   Writer
yes
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SlendyFox321 Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
There's a good boy!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner May 31, 2014   Writer
Yes
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deerfluff Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
The first thing that came to my mind when I read the first part of the story:

"I'll get you my pretty! And you're little dog too!"

"HEEHEEEHEHEHEHEH"
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Senator-Meowmix Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG me too!!!!!!!!Brohoof 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014   Writer
LOL
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Emmiek20 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
Awww! XD
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013   Writer
^^
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Emmiek20 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
XD
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SpyroCynder2002 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
When is the next part?
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013   Writer
Currently suffering from writers block.
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:iconspyrocynder2002:
SpyroCynder2002 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
What is that?
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013   Writer
It's when a writer either doesn't feel like writing or they have no idea of what to write next, I am currently suffering through both, and I blame my depression.
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SpyroCynder2002 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Still awesome! ☺
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013   Writer
:)
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:iconspyrocynder2002:
SpyroCynder2002 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
I'm serious!
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013   Writer
Ok
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CreepyPastaIsMyLife2 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Omgizzle (Yea i said omgizzleh dont be hatin) Moarrrr plezzzzz >:o
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013   Writer
Soon.
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CreepyPastaIsMyLife2 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
YAY Sorry for rushing chu if i was :tears: ... I pet ur face to make u feel better ^D^ :petting:
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013   Writer
Its cool
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Tizzy101 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

I love smile! he is my fav out of all the Creepypastas but he makes me cry because I had a dog kli him who would attack if someone hurt me and he drew blood so we had to give him away *cries*

 

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Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013   Writer
:(
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Tizzy101 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
it's fine we herd he got a really good home with no little kids (the person he bit was 6) but the funny part is he could smile like SD too and he could tell if someone was sad :D I still have smile dog so it is ok I guess XD :D
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013   Writer
:)
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Tizzy101 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
and your stories always make me smile or cry depends on the story
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2013   Writer
^_^
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yuki1112 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Um is there a pt.9?
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013   Writer
Not yet. Kinda dealing with writers block
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Tizzy101 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
FUCK  as soon as I start reading you gota go and get wrighters block?! FUCK THAT SHIT
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013   Writer
I'm sorry.
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Tizzy101 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you can't be sorry! I love your work and then righters block know I love your work so it just walks up and infects you! FUCK... THAT...... SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FUCK THE POLECE AND FUCK RIGHTERS BLOCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ('m not blaming you at all so yeah) (you are an amazing righter) 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013   Writer
:)
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yuki1112 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww maaaaan
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Jett1038 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Student General Artist
I. FUCKING. LOVE. THIS. THING.

I also have some stuff in my gallery. 

LOOK AT IT!

Plz.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013   Writer
Not a big pony or pokemon fan but you did a GREAT job. :iconthumbsupplz:
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Jett1038 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013  Student General Artist
im not really into ponies, and i cant draw Jett, and Skylar in their original forms(a.k.a, sonic OCs) but i might be able to make Kyia and Matul.

and thanks.
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SakuraYuurei Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love this story so much! :happybounce: 
Can't wait to see what happens next!
:iconmoarplz: :iconnaoplz:
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013   Writer
:P
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Valerie-the-Killer Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
You're a really great writer. Can't wait for the next one! :iconhappykittyplz:
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013   Writer
Thank you
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pandapeace Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
YAY SMILE~!
:iconyaysmiledogplz:
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013   Writer
^^
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