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When I woke up Jack was still holding me in his arms, cuddling me like a child cuddling a teddy bear. I smile and decide to go back to sleep. I start to hear my parents talking out side my door. I start panic. "Jack! Jack wake up!" I whisper, shacking him. He finally started to wake. "W-What is it?" he asked rubbing his 'eyes'. "My parents are here. I don't want them to find you." He got off the bed, I soon followed. "Where should I hide?" he asked. "My closet." I pull him towards my closet and I hear someone knocking on my door. 'Oh crap!' I thought. "(Name)? Honey are you awake?" I hear my mom ask from the other side. "Yes mom. I'm....getting dressed." I call back while pushing Jack into the closet. "(Name) you better not have a boy in there." I hear my dad say. "No dad you know I'm not that kind of girl." I guess after last night and the fact I am hiding a boy in my closet does make that kind of girl. "Alright. I just wanted to know if you were ok pumpkin."

Once Jack was safe in my closet I walk to the door and open. My mom was standing outside and pulled me into a hug. "Are you sure your alright sweetie?" "I'm fine mom. Why? Didn't you come home last night?" "No. The car broke down and we had to stay at a motel, I tried to call but my battery died." "It's ok mom. I'm fine." I said once she let me loose from her arms. "I've just been so worried about you ever since that lunatic came to town." I got confused at what she said. "Lunatic?" I asked "What lunatic?" "You haven't heard?" she asked. I shook my head. "I think both your father and I should explain."

She took my down stairs where my dad was in the living room watching football. "Honey, we need to talk to (Name)." My mom said. Dad looked at us as we sat down on the couch. "What about?" he asked. "About that monster out there." "You mean she doesn't know?" "Know what?" I asked. "(Name) there's been a crazed serial killer running around killing people and stealing their organs." My dad said. "That's why I was so worried when we couldn't contact you last night. The last place anyone saw him was around our neighborhood." My mom said. Once they mentioned organs, I knew they were talking about Jack. "But nothings happened and I didn't see or hear anything last night." "But that doesn't mean we're not worried for your safety." "Don't worry mom, I'll be ok. I'm gonna go back upstairs. I'm still a little tired." I get up and walk to the stairs. "Are you sure you don't have a boy up there?" My asked. "Daaad!" I laugh.

When I got back to my room, Jack was sitting on my bed with his head down. "Jack what's wrong?" I asked walking over and sitting next to him. "They told you about me didn't they? About who I am, and what I do." There was sadness in his voice. "....Jack..." I pull him into hug. "Jack...I don't care about what you do. I love you no matter what." I kiss his cheek and tighten my hug. He started to hug me back. "I love you too." He said a bit more cheerful.

Jack's POV

"I love you no matter what." Once I heard those words, my whole life felt like a fairy tale. I felt like I was the beast and she was my beauty. I felt like my life would be full of nothing but happy endings.


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Just a hint. Something very big, and very bad is going to happen. And it involves who some people call "The worst pasta of them all!" If you guess right i'll let you pick how the story ends.
Does this count as a cliffhanger?
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:iconpretty-physco:
Pretty-Physco Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2017
HE COMES ZALGOOOOOOOOO
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HaileyCatPanter13 Featured By Owner Edited Jun 8, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Slenderman!!!!! I swear if you come anywhere near me I'll kick you in the balls!!!!
slenderman:.......
Zalgo:Ha!
Same with you Zalgo!!!
 Zalgo:Really!!!!
Jeff:heh
You too Jeffrey!!!!
Jeff:aw man!!!!
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PastaLover0409 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2017  New Deviant
ya, i mea- wait, only offender has balls as far as i know.. unless.. you know, you go to THAT side of the fandom... *shivers* uuuggghhh wtf, why
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HaileyCatPanter13 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't really know what you mean by "THAT side of the fandom" but I just assumed slenderman did have balls.......... I mean how else would him and his brothers be alive?
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PastaLover0409 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2017  New Deviant
i mean the sinful side.. like, smut.. if that doesn't make sence, sex. also, slender and his brothers are interdenominational creatures so, i'd say magic XD
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Pretty-Physco Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017
SLENDYMAN
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Anime-Wolfie-14 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it
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GrystinaTheKiller Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2016  Professional Interface Designer
jk its ZALGO THE MOTHERF*CKING DEMON WHO IS A COMPLETE AND UTTER A**SWIPE AND A**HOLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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PastaLover0409 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2017  New Deviant
shit, chill, dude! we all know Lord Zalgo is a dick but, jesus christ
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GrystinaTheKiller Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2017  Professional Interface Designer
*bugs chirping and her shoulders shake up and down*
Cp except for Zalgo: *runs*
Zalgo: *pokes*
Me: *stops shaking but body twitches*
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GrystinaTheKiller Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2016  Professional Interface Designer
I BET ITS RAKEDY OR JEFF!!!!!!!!!!
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celestetherandom Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2016
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
im not risking it
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MzurixImane Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Zalgo.

Jeff: Well, thanks babe.

You're not mean enough!

Jeff: I'm not mean enough? Ooh, I'll show you mean!

NONONONO! (gets grabbed by Jeff, thrown on my bed and gets tickled) JEEEFF! HAHAHA STOP! THAT T-TICKLES! AAAHHH!

Eyeless Jack (bursts into room): What's going on-? JEFF!

Jeff (stops tickling me): What?

Eyeless Jack (gets all serious): You're on M's bed, and you're tickling her.

Uh-oh.

Eyeless Jack (gets a pouty face on): AND DIDN'T INVITE ME!

WHAT?!

Jeff (gets sneaky): Well,  you're more that welcomed to join...

NO! (tries to get up, but Jeff holds me down) STOP NO-! (Jack jumps on and tickles me as well) GUYS!! STOP IT! HAHAHA!!!!!

Slenderman (bursts into room): JEFF! JACK! LEAVE M ALONE!

Jeff and Eyeless Jack (stops tickling me): Yessir.

THANK YOU! (runs to bathroom)
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wolfgurldemon1999 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2016  Student General Artist
Zalgo. *Rolls eyes*
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Kiana-the-killer Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2016  Hobbyist Artist
SLENDYWD Gonester Icon 
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INFOCHAN666 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ZALGO
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Princess13098AJ Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2016  Student Filmographer
It's going to be Jeff. Isn't it?
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Apollosmoon Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Its going to be zalgo, or offenderman, isn't it?
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:iconlilsissyd:
LilSisSyd Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
That's what I was thinking
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:iconazly09:
AZLY09 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
The " worst pasta of them all" is Zalgo
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:iconlunalaruna:
LunaLaRuna Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww.... Eyeless Jack... He is a sweetheart in this
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Koolpuppy101 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i alway cry when theres a bad ending *Sniffles*
Jeff: why are you crying
im not im just sad happy
Jeff: i don't even
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mitskunisayzmow031 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2015  Student Filmographer
Soooooooo plz no bad stuff!!!!!!! I always cry!!!!
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EnderWolfPro Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2015
LAUGHING JACK OR OFFENDERMAN!!!!!
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abyssvoidsnowfall Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2015
ZALGOOOO!!!!!
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FoxyThePirateFoxyy Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015
WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in you
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Ask-cute-BEN-DROWNED Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2015  Student Artist
That's just gonna cause viruses how would you know if its true if it didn't HAPPEN to you?
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AZLY09 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Agree. And you should stop sharing this chain mails because it's annoying!
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
OMFG SO KAWAIIIIIIIIII     ShyHappy Freddy intensifies owo 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015   Writer
0W0
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Shadowraven12 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
KAWAIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Darkwater123 Featured By Owner May 28, 2015
I swear if zalgo does anything I will b*tch slap him
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LoneWolfOfTheWoods1 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015
Hmmmm. Scarecrow or JeffJeff
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Violet-Kent18 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2015  Student General Artist
Who the hell is Scarecrow
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LoneWolfOfTheWoods1 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2015
A third creepypasta she is not really popular
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wanderingSouls4ever Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2016  Hobbyist
i LUV scarecrow, shes so cute.
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2015   Writer
Scarecrow?
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PieKitty Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015  Student Digital Artist
o-o nuuuu~~~ not zalgo DD: >.> "im" soo going to be toy with by zalgo D: ;3;Run Away Eek--A Spider 
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Mizomim Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2015   Writer
:iconmanvsspiderplz:
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creepypastafreak241 Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015
i vote zalgo
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2015   Writer
ok
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MetalBladez00940902 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
((ZALGO'S GONNA RUIN IT ISN'T HE?!))
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015   Writer
Maybe. . . .
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MetalBladez00940902 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
((Okay then.))
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LpsNebula Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Student Interface Designer
Zalgo......
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015   Writer
Maybe...
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:iconlpsnebula:
LpsNebula Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2015  Student Interface Designer
hhhmmm maybe?....
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shadowslayer66 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014  Student Digital Artist
mr.slendyman
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:iconmizomim:
Mizomim Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2014   Writer
haha, slendyman
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shadowslayer66 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2015  Student Digital Artist
sometimes slendy gets on my nerves
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